Surprisingly,this king had gifted his children a pet dragon for their birthday.Although the dragon could be dangerous,the king made a decision to give it to them.As the king knew the twins would rule one day,he thought the dragon was a good gift to them.We will be answering the question”Is it okay to gift someone something dangerous even though it could help them one day?”

Sometimes giving a pet dragon to people could help them however,sometimes it won’t help them.I think it is not good to gift the children a pet dragon.This is because the dragon could get angry and hurt the children,king and everyone else in the castle.This could happen if he”the dragon” is not trained well so something bad could happen.It could help them one day but it could also do some bad things.Would you gift your children a dangerous pet even though it could help them one day.?

By answering this question,I don’t think it is okay to gift them a dangerous pet.Even though it could help them one day,the pet is still dangerous.Is this how you would protect yourself?I disagree because the dragon has fire that could burn important things.Although the dragon has fire,it could burn down the kingdom and they will have no where to live.This is why there are reasons why you should not give your children a dangerous pet.

I understand that this could help them one day,but I gave my reasons why it is not okay to give children a dangerous pet.It seems like the king thinks it is a good gift to his children so that they could proctect themselves one day.Do you think it is a good gift?

Some good points in this discussion text, Evelyne. You have shown a range of year 6 writing skills today and produced an excellent discussion piece.  It was an enjoyable read too!

 

 

Although I do not often talk about it, I have quite a few talents. One talent I have is making my friends and family laugh at school.  I normally joke and make my friends laugh because I don’t want to be made fun of by people I do not play with at school. I have always loved making my friends laugh because I don’t like seeing my friends sad. Even when my friends are crying, I try to make them laugh by telling them a joke that I hope will make them stop crying. I think I get my sense of humour from both of my parents but I can be a bit shy around new people. Around my friends I feel more secure when I’m saying a joke of making them laugh because I know they won’t make fun of me because they find me funny. Since I can’t tell them jokes face to face now I try to make my friends laugh when I’m on FaceTime with them. Another one of my talents is doing tricks on the trampoline.  I have always liked trying new flips and tricks since I have gotten a new trampoline. I found it very fun to do in the summer holidays and I have gotten better over time because at the start I couldn’t land a front flip or a front hand spring but after some time of practicing I have been able to land both of these tricks on a trampoline. Now, I find the front tricks very easy to land and do them but I have always wanted to do backflips and back hand springs. I have found these tricks very fascinating to watch on YouTube because they look cool and I have always wanted to try to do them. I watch a lot of tutorials on how to do them. I also have one more talent and it’s building. In the future I would love to be an architect because I find designing houses very fascinating; not only to do but also watch videos about designing. I like to build in a game I play and the houses normally turn out nice if I put my mind to it. In my opinion, I think when you build, it uses a lot of your time which makes you less bored  and it also calms you down. The best thing about it is that you can build any house your imagination holds.

I have many loves and passions. I love to bake with my family as it makes me really happy and I find baking really fun to do because, at this type of time, we can get very bored and we have nothing to do. When I bake with my family, it makes me happy and I feel less bored, which is good. I also love colouring because it calms me down but, it is much more fun when you’re doing it with some friends or family. Over the summer holidays, I loved going out with my friends to the park for a couple of hours and just hanging out. This made me really happy because I got to spend quality time with my friends. I love it when my friends and my family come around to my house to spend some time  and we get to play together. When my family and friends are not able to come over, I still spend time with them either or the phone or I play games with them, such as Fortnite or Roblox. I really enjoy playing games with my friends because when I can’t see them I’m still able to contact them and play some games with them. I do agree hanging out with friends and family face to face instead of games and FaceTiming is way more fun.

I’m only eleven at the moment, but when I’m older I have many dreams and hopes I would like to achieve. I have always wanted to learn how to drive as I have always found it interesting. It has always been my dream to  have my own car and drive to places on my own or with my friends and family. I want to learn how to drive as soon as possible because I want to feel the feeling of being able to drive to any places you want. I am also interested in cars, which makes me want to drive even more! I have many dreams and another one of them is getting my dream job which is being an architect (I find building and designing houses very fascinating and calming.) At the moment, I can not be an architect because I’m not old enough yet, so I play this game where you can build any type of house you want and that your imagination holds. That’s why I love architecture so much, because you are free to design whatever you want if your designing something for yourself. If you are designing something for someone else instead of you, you need to listen to what your clients imagination holds instead of yours which is still very fun to do because you’re not doing it for yourself. you’re doing it for someone else. I would also love to do that with a passion because I would love to see what other people’s style in architecture is. If I do get my dream job, then I would love to design my own house.

My talents

My talents are sports and a bit of creativity. I can draw ,I can shade and I can run really fast and some of these talents I could have done when I was little but I got my sporting talent when I was older. Yes,I had to practise my drawing and my shading but I also needed to practise playing basketball. I really enjoy using my sporting talent but I don’t really use my creative talent and I make the most out of my sporting talent by staying fit. I don’t show off my talents because  I am not that person that will just show off in everything.

My loves and passions

The people that I like to spend time with are my friends and family but I also like to spend time with my sibling as well. The things that make me happy are playing with my friends and spending time with my family. I also like to watch a bit of YouTube to relax if I don’t have anything else to do. Something else that makes me happy is playing outside and playing basketball in my back garden. I enjoy going outside in my free time if I am bored and I have nothing else to do.

My aspirations

My aspirations are to be a basketball player or someone who plays sport. I aspire to be someone who is involved with sport.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

My talents

I have quite a few talents. My most talented subject is maths. In maths, I can  times by 10,100 and 1000 and coordinates are my strongest points, although now we are learning lots of new equations  and my feelings towards maths  might change. When I go to secondary school,  I want to expand my knowledge about maths and hope to become good at those too. Now let’s get on with one of the most famous game in the world: “Minecraft”. A friend of mine let me play this game about 2 years ago, that was it…I was hooked! As time went on, I got better and better at the game so now I can build a lot of big buildings and I know loads of special features. In one of my worlds, I even made a working plane! That is quite hard to make in the game! I am good at making red stone buildings too.

My loves and passions

My favorite subject and love is space science. When I grow up I want to be a space scientist. Also I would love to work for NASA.  NASA is a government agency  that is responsible for making sure that the U.S. space program is only used to benefit mankind. Their mission is to explore space and flight research (aeronautics).  NASA stands for National Aeronautics and Space Administration.
As I have grown up,  I have always been interested in space; space travel, stars, planets and dreamed of being a astronaut.  Last year I read about the Kepler space telescope and the how scientists are discovering new planets. They name the planets after the telescope, for example Kepler 22b. They have found a number of earth-like planets too which I have started making a PowerPoint presentation on. I think at this moment Astronomy is what I like best.  Astronomy is the study of space, stars, planets, the sun, the moon, galaxies and more. Black holes are very interesting too.

My aspirations

In the future, I want somewhere to live and will need a good job to support myself. I would love to live in a mansion with a gigantic garden, with an indoor and outdoor Olympic sized swimming pool, fitness center and last, but not least, a games room.

I aspire to be a NASA scientist. To be hired as a NASA scientist, I need the minimum of a bachelor’s degree in physics, astronomy, astrophysics, geology and space science or a similar field. I also need to be good at keeping secrets. If I want to work for NASA, I will have to move to America. This all sounds exciting to me, although it’s going to be hard work!

It’s important to me because I like learning about space science.

 

 

Talent

I have noticed that in the past few years, my artwork started to improve, bit by bit.Even though it might not look like how it’s suppose to look , I would add more shading to made it realistic and smudge some parts and blend it altogether.The best thing about this talent is it is very useful when planning in a lesson.In the near future, I would like to Improve my drawings so that if they are great enough, I might have a chance on becoming a designer.

I love music, as it helps to calm me down.  During bad situations it also makes me forget my surroundings.The type of music I listen to is K-pop(Korean pop) as it cheers me up, but also it makes me feel an ‘unexplainable’ feeling of happiness, since music is everything to me.

Although I don’t talk about my talents,I have quite a few. One that I have had for a long time is being good at making friends. I have had this talent since I was in year one, so when I was five I was good at that when I made friends with Conall. More talents are: being good at football, fixing technology and being good at finding solutions for problems. I have been good at football for two years because I joined a football team, where I made friends and I play in defence. Also I found out I was good at technology when I tried to fix my mum’s iPad and that was when I was 7 years old! it was hard. My last talent is a new one, which is solving problems- what’s a good talent

I love to make stuff because it makes me calm and quiet for a few minutes so I’m different when I’m making stuff. I also love to have fun because it’s something that gets you ACTIVE which is good at the moment.

My goals and hopes and dreams
My goals, hopes and dreams. I have lots of them. One of my hopes is to have my own bungalow in Cornwall . I know what I need to get my own bungalow -one is I need money. My dream is to have a family and children but only one child. My hopes are to be a high intensity therapist or a CEO of a company but all my money will not be spent on cars and mansions but on my family, friends and company because it is what you should do. My goals are to do my GCSE’s well and get a qualification in psychology or a qualification in technology.

Although I do not talk about my talent,I do have a talent.The talent that i have is calligraphy. What I like about calligraphy is that you get to use brush pens which is what you use to write calligraphy with. I have always liked calligraphy because it is interesting on how it looks like when you write it. As I got older , i have been practising everyday with brush pens to make sure I get better.The reason why I like calligraphy is because you can show them in different colours and styles.

I also have love and passions as well.I lové to spend time with my family.This is because it makes me happy when I spend time around my family and seeing everyone happy. Even though i love spending time with my family, my favourite food is pizza.I like pizza because it is delicious and tasty to eat.It makes me feel relieved because sometimes you want to eat it. I love to watch people bake on baking shows because sometimes I want to try and bake it.This is because in the future I want to bake .

My goal that I want to achieve in the next 5, 10 or 15 years is to be able to be a baker.I would like to be a baker because I want to bake cakes ,cookies and cupcakes.When I finish secondary school, I would like to know how to drive so that I will be able to drive to different places.I want to have my own home and get a job to earn money.

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Uncomfortable, irritating, and suffering from itchiness- is this relatable when it comes to lockdown delivery?You ‘re not the only one suffering, spreading across the globe, we have all been in this situation were the Corona virus takes over your casual daily life.We all know that it is right to avoid touching our faces however the itchiness is uncontrollable! When the delivery man arrives to give your delivery, you wear gloves,mask,and equip a bottle of antibacterial spray.However something is bothering… Itchy. You cannot scratch to release the pain whilst you are handling the delivery box.But those are the old days…Now we have a useful product called “Itchy Fixy”and it cures your anxiety!It is a system that detects your itchy area, after that it’s stretchable stick can go to the area and press or scratch it for you with it’s rubber balls. After the scratching, it sheds to a new skin for its next operation as the first time may contains bacteria and germs. This is the perfect product for lockdown.

The “Itchy Fixy” is portable and you can use it when or where you want. Due to the coronavirus outbreak, this product is now affordable to any customer. It carries the price of a stunning £7.99 and has a discount towards NHS staff of 20% off meaning that the price would be £1.60.However, if you still cannot afford it then you could grant a loan to our company.This product is 5 cm wide and 7.5 cm long ( if it extends and stretches , the length would be 20 cm maximum). You can order it online on our website //hhh //wwwItchyFixy.worldwide.UK.com, it comes in different shapes,sizes,colours and patterns.The Itchy Fixy is very simple to activate and  blue-tootconnect to your phone, after connecting to your phone it can sense what type of bacterias are on the shedding of Itchy Fixy. The system needs USB charging and the battery can last for 23 hours, which is very efficient towards working NHS staff and travellers.

What are the materials of Itchy Fixy and is it harmful to the human body? How does it differ from the other products?

Itchy Fixy is made from rubber( harmless good-quality type ) and a a wired system, which sits in the center of this product.Unlike the other products, it isn’t just safe for the human body, the environment too! The plastic can be recycled and the system can be taken out to become a new one.However, the shedding is harmful as it contains bacteria from the previous scratch so it should be flipped inside out and thrown into a rubbish bin after the operation. You cannot reuse a shedding that already contains bacteria.

Can the shedding foils run out?

Yes, it can run out after 85 uses so we now sell more shedding for yours however, you should change your itchy Fixy  every 15 days in case if you fixie has bacteria on it(because Itchy Fixy is electrical meaning that you cannot wash it with liquid).that is a negative for our product so we are expecting to change the design in the future.

 

Great work, Qian Qian. Al week you ave worked on the success criteria to write this persuasive text and I like your unique questions the dragons may ask, that you have added at the end. Brilliant work!!

 

 

Introduction

Scared,bored, feeling isolated?  Well my name is Ellenor Jepson and I have a way to Solve all your problems with my product called The Hoop Sport Entertainment.  In a time where we are separated from our our friends and family because we are all sticking to the stay at home rule, it can be hard to stay in contact.  It’s also so important to try and stay as active as possible too.  My product is designed for you to interact with the people you love and miss during this lonely time and encourage daily exercise.

Explanation

My product works by connecting it to your WiFi at home  and registering it on your device.  You register using your phone, iPad or laptop.  Then you send a link for your friends and family to register to your Hoop Sport Entertainment. You can play one on one or in a group.  It charges up with through a usb and you can still play while it’s charging.  When you throw the ball into the hoop, the hoop has a camera that records your score and sends an alert to the people on your friends list.  You get 2 points every time you get the ball through the hoop and it then sends your final score to whoever your playing with and you can try and beat each other. This is a good way to entertain yourself and keep yourself fit and active.  It’s also designed for indoor and outdoor use.  You can also adjust the height of the hoop so this product is available for all ages.

You may ask were you can you get my product from? You can get my product from my website called sportsathome.co.uk my product is only £15.99 delivery is free.  When you order the Hoop Sport Entertainment, you will be given a 10% off code to give to a friend or family member so they can get this product at a reduced price.  They will also be given a 10% off code to pass on too.  I think this product is different from anything else on the market as it helps to stay in touch with people and you can stay healthy and active at the same time.

Very well written, Elle. You have created a very useful electronic device and it would be an excellent resource in lockdown.  you have used a good range of persuasive language in this writing- especially rhetorical questions and you have thought hard about answring the Dragon’s questions.Well done!

Depressed,heartbroken and wishing it was over-Do you wish that this has never happened?Across the whole world countries has been in lockdown due to Corona Virus which has been spreading around the world.Although we want to meet friends and family,we all have to stay at home.Whilst in lockdown,we can’t see our family members like grandma’s and grandpa’s or aunties and uncles.What can we do? My name is Evelyne Anenou and I have designed “game frame”.This is a device that can be used without wifi.Instead of going on your phone or iPads you could go on game frame.You could watch anything you want and play games on game frame.Even though you are using wifi when you are on your phone on game frame you don’t need wifi.So what are you waiting for!Come and try this new device!

I have designed”gameframe” that can be used for everyone.This device,which is called the gameframe ,can be used anywhere. Although it can be used everywhere, it doesn’t need wifi for you is it. It’s can come in three different colours which are red,black and white.You could watch my any tv shows,listen to music and play games to make sure you don’t use a lot of wifi at your house.The gameframe,which will be able to charge,will work by using an iPhone charger to make sure it works. This will cost £150.Anybody could be buying the gameframe as it doesn’t need wifi.What are you waiting for!Come and buy this new device!

How is this different to a iPad or phone?
Although people use an iPad or phone,you could use the “gameframe” that is something different.This gameframe doesn’t use wifi as a phone or iPad does use wifi.You might use your phone or iPad ,but with gameframe you can use it as you are not spending too much time on your phone.You could use this anytime to make sure you don’t spend too much time on your phone.
Why did you not include the option of FaceTime?
When we designed the gameframe,we considered not to have FaceTime on it.This is because there are a lot of other devices that could allow you to FaceTime a family member or friend.It was designed to play games without using any wifi.This means that you don’t waste your wifi at your house.

 

Great writing, Evelyne- as always. I can see you have clearly thought about how you would persuade the dragons and used all the English skills taught to help you.  Your product is unique and interesting and you have answered the questions carefully and thoroughly in the final paragraph. An excellent big write!