13angelw

LC: T12 To use character, dialogue and action to advance events in narrative writing.

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                                                                          She’s coming! There was a family who had a strange girl.. she always screamed at night and always […]

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13lexied

LC T12 To use characters dialogue and action to advance events in narrative writing .

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Once upon a time there was a little boy called Freddie and he lived with his mum Charmaine and his dad Garry and they also lived with his 2 cousin Chloe and Lexie and he also lived with his aunty Kerry .The next day my nan came over and she said she booked us all […]

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13evelynea

Lc:T12 To use character dialogue and action to advance events in narrative writing.500 words big write.

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I wonder what we would find in the blazing, green forest?.They were all best friends Rosie,sora and Jamie.They all liked to go exploring and see gorgeous leaves,stunning leaves and other lots of creatures. Rosie,sora and Jamie were all walking to see if they had found anything so they could keep it for their collection but […]

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13lexieb

Save me~lc:to use character, diolge and action in story

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I panicked uncontrollably as I got dragged further and further away from my home… I screamed and cried but nobody cared or even noticed, it was as such I was invisible… My world was spinning and the only 2 words I could mumble  out underneath my tears was SAVE ME! I had just came to […]

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13masonn

Lc: to use character dialogue and action to advance events in narrative writing.k

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The war against vampires! A day were vampires and goblin at war the vampires do not just drink any blood it is goblins. The goblins live at X502 but the vampires do not know that they are trying to find there location for months and have no luck finding it. The goblins know were the […]

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13kayleighp

LC:T12 To use character, dialogue and action to advance events in narrative writing.

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Maddie wasn’t like other girls. She loved blood. I know this doesn’t sound that weird but she would always having nightmares, always screaming in the night, shouting help! There was a swing in our garden, Maddie would always be outside on the swing or cutting heads off Barbie dolls. Maddie would always tell me her nightmares. […]

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13liviap

LC: to use character, dialogue and action to advance events in narrative writing/by Livia

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My adventure started in the middle of the night, when I saw a little old cottage in the corner of my eyes, I knew it wasn’t a good idea to go inside but I felt the need to. At that moment I thought I had made a mistake, Even though I knew I would risk […]

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13qianqianz

Number 666 – LC: T12 To use character, dialogue and action to advance events in narrative writing

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In an isolated mansion,mom is drinking again as usual whilst the girl listens to the historical news( unknown creatures are found on Earth) . Alone and depressed, mom consumes alcohol as usual to wipe away the unforgiving memories of dad’s death. The girl announces the message to mom , but mom is unbothered and convinces […]

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13daivamr

LC: T12 To use character, dialogue and action to advance events in narrative writing, Daivam, EDITED AGAIN

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                   The Battery.       Thousands of people climbed Mount Everest, and thousands yet failed to achieve the summit. Peter wasn’t one of them as he was an experienced mountaineer, he climbed mountains for a living. Peter had no idea that he was going to climb […]

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13hannahp

LC:T12 To use character dialogue and action to advance events in narrative writing.

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“DON’T  HURT MY CHILD!”Slayer’s mother cried out loud .”YOU LIED TO ME ! SLAYER  WILL BECOME MORE POWERFUL THAN ME WHEN SHE GROWS UP!!”  The king yelled back furiously.”I’m sorry ..JUST DON’T HURT MY DAUGHTER “The queen shouted.” NOOOO! MAMA!”Slayer cried as something unexpected happened..”What did you do dad?YOU KILLED HER!Get ready ! I will […]

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