Introduction

Scared,bored, feeling isolated?  Well my name is Ellenor Jepson and I have a way to Solve all your problems with my product called The Hoop Sport Entertainment.  In a time where we are separated from our our friends and family because we are all sticking to the stay at home rule, it can be hard to stay in contact.  It’s also so important to try and stay as active as possible too.  My product is designed for you to interact with the people you love and miss during this lonely time and encourage daily exercise.

Explanation

My product works by connecting it to your WiFi at home  and registering it on your device.  You register using your phone, iPad or laptop.  Then you send a link for your friends and family to register to your Hoop Sport Entertainment. You can play one on one or in a group.  It charges up with through a usb and you can still play while it’s charging.  When you throw the ball into the hoop, the hoop has a camera that records your score and sends an alert to the people on your friends list.  You get 2 points every time you get the ball through the hoop and it then sends your final score to whoever your playing with and you can try and beat each other. This is a good way to entertain yourself and keep yourself fit and active.  It’s also designed for indoor and outdoor use.  You can also adjust the height of the hoop so this product is available for all ages.

You may ask were you can you get my product from? You can get my product from my website called sportsathome.co.uk my product is only £15.99 delivery is free.  When you order the Hoop Sport Entertainment, you will be given a 10% off code to give to a friend or family member so they can get this product at a reduced price.  They will also be given a 10% off code to pass on too.  I think this product is different from anything else on the market as it helps to stay in touch with people and you can stay healthy and active at the same time.

Very well written, Elle. You have created a very useful electronic device and it would be an excellent resource in lockdown.  you have used a good range of persuasive language in this writing- especially rhetorical questions and you have thought hard about answring the Dragon’s questions.Well done!