Uncomfortable, irritating, and suffering from itchiness- is this relatable when it comes to lockdown delivery?You ‘re not the only one suffering, spreading across the globe, we have all been in this situation were the Corona virus takes over your casual daily life.We all know that it is right to avoid touching our faces however the itchiness is uncontrollable! When the delivery man arrives to give your delivery, you wear gloves,mask,and equip a bottle of antibacterial spray.However something is bothering… Itchy. You cannot scratch to release the pain whilst you are handling the delivery box.But those are the old days…Now we have a useful product called “Itchy Fixy”and it cures your anxiety!It is a system that detects your itchy area, after that it’s stretchable stick can go to the area and press or scratch it for you with it’s rubber balls. After the scratching, it sheds to a new skin for its next operation as the first time may contains bacteria and germs. This is the perfect product for lockdown.

The “Itchy Fixy” is portable and you can use it when or where you want. Due to the coronavirus outbreak, this product is now affordable to any customer. It carries the price of a stunning £7.99 and has a discount towards NHS staff of 20% off meaning that the price would be £1.60.However, if you still cannot afford it then you could grant a loan to our company.This product is 5 cm wide and 7.5 cm long ( if it extends and stretches , the length would be 20 cm maximum). You can order it online on our website //hhh //wwwItchyFixy.worldwide.UK.com, it comes in different shapes,sizes,colours and patterns.The Itchy Fixy is very simple to activate and  blue-tootconnect to your phone, after connecting to your phone it can sense what type of bacterias are on the shedding of Itchy Fixy. The system needs USB charging and the battery can last for 23 hours, which is very efficient towards working NHS staff and travellers.

What are the materials of Itchy Fixy and is it harmful to the human body? How does it differ from the other products?

Itchy Fixy is made from rubber( harmless good-quality type ) and a a wired system, which sits in the center of this product.Unlike the other products, it isn’t just safe for the human body, the environment too! The plastic can be recycled and the system can be taken out to become a new one.However, the shedding is harmful as it contains bacteria from the previous scratch so it should be flipped inside out and thrown into a rubbish bin after the operation. You cannot reuse a shedding that already contains bacteria.

Can the shedding foils run out?

Yes, it can run out after 85 uses so we now sell more shedding for yours however, you should change your itchy Fixy  every 15 days in case if you fixie has bacteria on it(because Itchy Fixy is electrical meaning that you cannot wash it with liquid).that is a negative for our product so we are expecting to change the design in the future.

 

Great work, Qian Qian. Al week you ave worked on the success criteria to write this persuasive text and I like your unique questions the dragons may ask, that you have added at the end. Brilliant work!!

 

 

Introduction

Scared,bored, feeling isolated?  Well my name is Ellenor Jepson and I have a way to Solve all your problems with my product called The Hoop Sport Entertainment.  In a time where we are separated from our our friends and family because we are all sticking to the stay at home rule, it can be hard to stay in contact.  It’s also so important to try and stay as active as possible too.  My product is designed for you to interact with the people you love and miss during this lonely time and encourage daily exercise.

Explanation

My product works by connecting it to your WiFi at home  and registering it on your device.  You register using your phone, iPad or laptop.  Then you send a link for your friends and family to register to your Hoop Sport Entertainment. You can play one on one or in a group.  It charges up with through a usb and you can still play while it’s charging.  When you throw the ball into the hoop, the hoop has a camera that records your score and sends an alert to the people on your friends list.  You get 2 points every time you get the ball through the hoop and it then sends your final score to whoever your playing with and you can try and beat each other. This is a good way to entertain yourself and keep yourself fit and active.  It’s also designed for indoor and outdoor use.  You can also adjust the height of the hoop so this product is available for all ages.

You may ask were you can you get my product from? You can get my product from my website called sportsathome.co.uk my product is only £15.99 delivery is free.  When you order the Hoop Sport Entertainment, you will be given a 10% off code to give to a friend or family member so they can get this product at a reduced price.  They will also be given a 10% off code to pass on too.  I think this product is different from anything else on the market as it helps to stay in touch with people and you can stay healthy and active at the same time.

Very well written, Elle. You have created a very useful electronic device and it would be an excellent resource in lockdown.  you have used a good range of persuasive language in this writing- especially rhetorical questions and you have thought hard about answring the Dragon’s questions.Well done!

Depressed,heartbroken and wishing it was over-Do you wish that this has never happened?Across the whole world countries has been in lockdown due to Corona Virus which has been spreading around the world.Although we want to meet friends and family,we all have to stay at home.Whilst in lockdown,we can’t see our family members like grandma’s and grandpa’s or aunties and uncles.What can we do? My name is Evelyne Anenou and I have designed “game frame”.This is a device that can be used without wifi.Instead of going on your phone or iPads you could go on game frame.You could watch anything you want and play games on game frame.Even though you are using wifi when you are on your phone on game frame you don’t need wifi.So what are you waiting for!Come and try this new device!

I have designed”gameframe” that can be used for everyone.This device,which is called the gameframe ,can be used anywhere. Although it can be used everywhere, it doesn’t need wifi for you is it. It’s can come in three different colours which are red,black and white.You could watch my any tv shows,listen to music and play games to make sure you don’t use a lot of wifi at your house.The gameframe,which will be able to charge,will work by using an iPhone charger to make sure it works. This will cost £150.Anybody could be buying the gameframe as it doesn’t need wifi.What are you waiting for!Come and buy this new device!

How is this different to a iPad or phone?
Although people use an iPad or phone,you could use the “gameframe” that is something different.This gameframe doesn’t use wifi as a phone or iPad does use wifi.You might use your phone or iPad ,but with gameframe you can use it as you are not spending too much time on your phone.You could use this anytime to make sure you don’t spend too much time on your phone.
Why did you not include the option of FaceTime?
When we designed the gameframe,we considered not to have FaceTime on it.This is because there are a lot of other devices that could allow you to FaceTime a family member or friend.It was designed to play games without using any wifi.This means that you don’t waste your wifi at your house.

 

Great writing, Evelyne- as always. I can see you have clearly thought about how you would persuade the dragons and used all the English skills taught to help you.  Your product is unique and interesting and you have answered the questions carefully and thoroughly in the final paragraph. An excellent big write!

Lonely, Isolated and missing loved ones – Does this sound familiar to you? Well all around the United Kingdom and around the globe, families and close friends have been separated due to lockdown because of the Coronavirus outbreak. Although people know being separated is the right thing to do, many people are starting to feel lonely because no one is by their side at the moment and they are starting to understand the feeling of being separated from their family and friends. Children kept away from cousins, Grandparents separated from Grandchildren and closed loved ones locked behind doors. Even though we have apps to contact our friends and family it is not the same feeling when your seeing them through a phone and seeing them in real life this is people you can’t hug them on the phone you can’t play games together on the phone. Can you? While in real life you can do all them things when you see them. My name is Livia and I would like to introduce you to the “Cheering up letter” this letter has a little sentence on it that should make someone feel a bit  more happy for the day on the letter it says “ To friends and family, I miss you so much I hope your feeling well and doing good.” I have made this type of letter/ picture so you can send it to your friends and family so they know that they are not forgotten by the close and loved ones!

The “cheering up poster” has been designed to make someone in a good mood and to cheer them up! There is a big variety of colours to choose from for the colour you want your poster to be. This poster is meant to make someone’s day without having to see them so when you are buying a poster you will not be charged any money, this is because the poster should make one of your friends or family happy, and a smile from a loved one is priceless so we are making the posters free! You could even take a picture of one of the posters and text it to the people you miss. The posters are very good quality posters with many cute designs to choose from. There is also the “extreme cheering up poster” although this poster does cost 20p it’s really worth the price, on the extreme poster the is a little pouch full of little happy and inspiring quotes you could even find some treats in there but, the pouch isn’t just the only thing that makes it different from the normal posters there is also a button on it and when you press it, it will either say “I miss you” or it will start playing a little happy song. So it is worth buying the “cheering up poster” or the “extreme cheering up poster” to make your day or someone else’s day!

Although speaking over the phone or using video chat to talk with someone Is something that lots of families are doing at this time, the “cheering up poster” offers something different. This poster is a way to not to call your family and friends everyday you can just send a picture of your poster through a text, it is a way to show family and friends that you are still thinking about them across the day. You may phone family and friends once a day, or even once a week mainly when you have time for a conversation. But with the “cheering up poster” or the “extreme cheering up poster” whenever you’re feeling forgotten or lonely, or your just missing someone you can use the poster to cheer yourself up or you could send someone a picture of it he amazing poster! You don’t need news to tell them, or the time for a long chat – you just need the time to cheer someone up!

Wonderful work, Livia and you have upleveled and improved this excellent piece of writing all week!  I love the way you have chosen specific vocabulary to persuade and you have structured ec sentence carefully to entice your audience (the dragons) to buy your product. You should be rightfully proud of this work.

Lonely, Isolated and missing loved ones – Does this sound familiar to you? Well all around the United Kingdom and around the globe, families and close friends have been separated due to lockdown because of the Coronavirus outbreak. Although people know being separated is the right thing to do, many people are starting to feel lonely because no one is by their side at the moment and they are starting to understand the feeling of being separated from their family and friends. Children kept away from cousins, Grandparents separated from Grandchildren and closed loved ones locked behind doors. Even though we have apps to contact our friends and family it is not the same feeling when your seeing them through a phone and seeing them in real life this is people you can’t hug them on the phone you can’t play games together on the phone. Can you? While in real life you can do all them things when you see them. My name is Livia and I would like to introduce you to the “Cheering up letter” this letter has a little sentence on it that should make someone feel a bit  more happy for the day on the letter it says “ To friends and family, I miss you so much I hope your feeling well and doing good.” I have made this type of letter/ picture so you can send it to your friends and family so they know that they are not forgotten by the close and loved one! 

Well done, Livia. This is great work and we discussed it on Seesaw.

Many people in lockdown at this point are getting board and many people are separated from there family’s and feel isolated with no one around them. Although people are doing there exercises they are doing it alone. Well I have found a solution for that a electrical bike that you can communicate whilst doing your exercise so you don’t feel so alone whilst staying healthy. Other people have a hard time finding a way to stay healthy and if they are separated from someone so this is a perfect thing to use for communication and for you to stay healthy. There are other main features to this machine such as the screen for checking your pulse and heart rate and recording so other people that have this can give you tips on how to get started.

 

A great idea for a design, Simas.

This is a high quality machine that will keep you healthy and fit whilst staying at home in these tough times and you can video call other people that are also using it if you feel like you need comfort whilst exercising. The price of this will be £250 per bike. It will come with wireless charging so you won’t need to plug anything in it will just charge when you see that the battery is low. This dike is designed essentially for talking to your friends whilst exercising and for recording to give people that are using it tips so they get a bit of an idea of what to do. It will also come in different features like the cheaper bike will cost £200 with no wireless charging.

 

A good try, Simas but you can uplevel this work by adding some extra clausing.  Look back at the powerpoint for today’s lesson and uplevel you writing by starting sentences in different ways.  Add some extra information using relative clauses and you coud even add a list which will use a colon too.

 

The “cheering up poster” has been designed to make someone is a good mood and to cheer them up! There is a big variety of colours to choose from for the colour you want your poster to be. This poster is meant to make someone’s day without having to see them so when you are buying a poster you will not be charged any money, this is because the poster should make one of your friends or family happy, and a smile from a loved one is priceless so we are making the posters free! You could even take a picture of one of the posters and text it to the people you miss. The posters are very good quality posters with many cute designs to choose from. There is also the “extreme cheering up poster” although this poster does cost 20p it is really worth the price. On the extreme poster the is a little pouch full of little happy and inspiring quotes you could even find some treats in there but, the pouch isn’t just the only thing that makes it different from the normal posters there is also a button on it and when you press it, it will either say “I miss you” or it will start playing a little happy song. So it is worth buying the “cheering up poster” or the “extreme cheering up poster” to make your day or someone else’s day!

Very clear, persuasive ideas today Livia and you haveused some subordinate clauses in this work. Remember to punctuate the clauses with commas. I have highlighted one sentence where you have written the subordinate clause but need to add the comma.  Also the word is is highlighted as the sentence doesn’t make sense.

Hi everyone 👋🏽today I’m here to talk to you about the latest COVID 19 and   our lockdown
in UK 🇬🇧.Now many people are wondering 🧐when will this disaster cease well I don’t exactly know the answer to this question right now🤔 ,but many Scientists 👩‍🔬,doctors👨‍⚕️  and nurses are working👩‍💻 very hard to try and save 🥇as much lives 🏆as possible👏, in order to stop the Corona virus 🦠 from spreading even more make sure you keep yourselfs clean especially your hands👐. But wait how do u keep your hands  Clean?🧴 To keep your hands clean please follow these information ℹ️

▪️You should wash your hands for the amounts it takes to sing 🎶 “Happy Birthday “🥳  twice (around 20seconds)

▪️wet your hands with water 💧

▪️apply enough soap  to cover your hands 🧴

▪️Rub your hands together👏
▪️Use 1 hand 🖐 to rub the back of the other hand and clean it between the fingers 🖖.Do the same for the other  Hand 🤚

▪️Rub your hands together and clean it between your fingers

▪️Rub the back of your fingers against your palms

▪️Rub your thumb using the other Hand🤚.Do the same with the other thumb 👍

▪️Rub the tips of your fingers on the palm of your hand 🖐. Do the same for the other hand 🤚

▪️Rinse your hands with water 💧

▪️Dry your hands with completely a disposable towel

▪️Use the disposable towel to turn off the tap

🔲Thank you 🙏 for reading 📖 this use full information text

🔲We will go through this together and come out this problem together ,

🔲Together  there will no longer be such a thing as COIVD 19,

🔲Thank you all for protecting us and guiding us through this tragedy

🔲Thank you NHS for all your support through this heart breaking situation 👏🙌💪🏽

 

Excellent work Marcela on your ideas on Lockdown.  Well done for contributing. I’d love to see you post work on Seesaw so you can carry on working and learning regularly.  If you  need help getting onto Seesaw, let the school know or send a message to me here on blogs and I can help you.  Mrs. Rawlins