Explanation

This is a high quality machine that will keep you healthy and fit whilst staying at home in these tough times and you can video call other people that are also using it if you feel like you need comfort whilst exercising. The price of this will be £250 per bike. It will come with wireless charging so you won’t need to plug anything in it will just charge when you see that the battery is low. This dike is designed essentially for talking to your friends whilst exercising and for recording to give people that are using it tips so they get a bit of an idea of what to do. It will also come in different features like the cheaper bike will cost £200 with no wireless charging.

 

A good try, Simas but you can uplevel this work by adding some extra clausing.  Look back at the powerpoint for today’s lesson and uplevel you writing by starting sentences in different ways.  Add some extra information using relative clauses and you coud even add a list which will use a colon too.

 

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