The “cheering up poster” has been designed to make someone is a good mood and to cheer them up! There is a big variety of colours to choose from for the colour you want your poster to be. This poster is meant to make someone’s day without having to see them so when you are buying a poster you will not be charged any money, this is because the poster should make one of your friends or family happy, and a smile from a loved one is priceless so we are making the posters free! You could even take a picture of one of the posters and text it to the people you miss. The posters are very good quality posters with many cute designs to choose from. There is also the “extreme cheering up poster” although this poster does cost 20p it is really worth the price. On the extreme poster the is a little pouch full of little happy and inspiring quotes you could even find some treats in there but, the pouch isn’t just the only thing that makes it different from the normal posters there is also a button on it and when you press it, it will either say “I miss you” or it will start playing a little happy song. So it is worth buying the “cheering up poster” or the “extreme cheering up poster” to make your day or someone else’s day!

Very clear, persuasive ideas today Livia and you haveused some subordinate clauses in this work. Remember to punctuate the clauses with commas. I have highlighted one sentence where you have written the subordinate clause but need to add the comma.  Also the word is is highlighted as the sentence doesn’t make sense.