Shallow part 2

It was a late night and the friends were hanging out in the tree house until..”HUH!? WHAT WAS THAT!?” Heather “asked a piece of Black Fabric” Izzy answered, Harry took it from Heather and put it under the microscope, “interesting..” Harry said “what are these grey particles?” He thought “guys…there are grey…particles” “what..” Heather said “we have an alien..” Izzy muttered, out of now where a big bolt of thunder clashed to the ground “AHHH!” Heather screamed falling on Harry “Sorry Harry” She said. “It’s ok Heather” Harry chirped “I’m going to go and get something for us to eat!” Heather said “ok don’t be long” “I won’t be long!” Heather chirped. As she was walking along the yard, a beam of light came down and grabbed her “HELP!” She screamed “hold on, its a dress or a worm.” “OH MY GOSH!” Harry yelled as he grabbed Heathers legs, but he came with her instead “Ahhhh!” They screamed and then they disappeared. “They woke up in a forest with only a bit of food and as for Heather… “EWWW A DRESS DISGUSTING!” She yelled as she tore it up into something else “better” she said, Harry just looked at her, he didn’t know   what to do or say. “Mean while, in the real world..” said the narrator “when will she wake up..” Asked Harry” in a day or so…” Said the Doctor, “Harry…” asked Izzy “yes Izzy?” Asked Harry “Heather will be ok…right?” She asked “yes” he said “well…I hope so..” Harry thought “back in the coma land..” said the narrator “Harry we have to get out of here!” “You tell me!” He             Said, they looked around for an exist but only found, wood and an old shoe “OH PERFECT!” Yelled Heather sarcastically “wha-come on!” Harry yelled, the exist was on the other side of a Long and deep cliff. *we have to jump Heather…” Said Harry “back in the real world” said the narrator “Heather wake up..” Harry thought with tears in his eyes. “Back in coma dream land..” “JUMP!? ARE YOU MAD!” Heather asked “no choice, look watch me…” Harry said He took a step back and jumped, he made it, “here goes nothing thought Heather” “You can make it Heather!” Both Real Harry and fake Harry said but as they were about to leave…CRASH! A tree fell down “no…” said Harry “we have to climb it!” Heather said climbing over “your right..” Harry said “We made it..” she thought as she went through the door. She woke up from the coma “HEATHER!” Harry screamed with joy “WHAT THE!? Yelled Izzy “OH MY GOSH!” Yelled Izzy “w-what…” said Heather “am I back..?” She asked “yes you are!” Said Harry happily “wow..” she said.

My story

Hungrily, Nicky snacked on her last half of her sandwich. On the outside of her sandwich, was a worm, she looked around and there was trails of worms. Nicky and Kiki slowly started walking further and could now see the light from about two point three miles away.

As soon as Nicky and Kiki walked the two point miles they could see the beautiful light of day . Suddenly Nicky quickly ran up to the palm trees and drunk a coconut . They could hear a thump coming towards them , it was the beach queen ! The dress was green and the shoes were orange . But Nicky and Kiki had to get back home.

Once they had seen the queen they had a conversation , it was lovely , they talked about life, how people were nice. After that, Nicky and Kiki had to go home , which way is home ? Said Nicky I don’t know replied the beach queen . Nicky and Kiki was stranded , luckily the queen was handy so she got some bamboo and tough leaves and made a boat.

As nicky and Kiki walked across the beach she could see a box , but it looked like a safe . Nicky tried to open it for hours and the password was zero zero zero zero . She looked inside the box and it was a key ! While Kiki was sniffing the tall green grass on the way she found a secret door that led to somewhere…….

The secret door led to puppy land . Obviously Kiki was excited to go meet some new friends, she hadn’t seen them since she got stuck in the tunnel. A few minutes after discovering the land ,they bumped into a puppy named diamond . Diamond told Kiki she had a power but they didn’t know wan at it was.

Diamond , Nicky and Kiki tried lots of power posibilaties but they couldn’t find kikis. Kiki felt a tap on her back and it was the beach queen ! But why was she here. Queen explains that Nicky was in danger , she said when the moon tonight rises up she will be there forever so she got a room and were there forvever

The tunnel

My new amazing, friendly village has lots of people, who are kind and caring and will help you. The village never gets raided: it’s rich. The sun is always happy so it shines. At night the clouds are angry so there is thunder. Imagine the hall is always busy, people are always talking, when you try to get out you might get a fright as the door is full of  people.

The village was still quite new for me so I walked around a bit. I saw someone with a crown training and I asked what he was training for. He was the king of the village. He was very grumpy to some people but not me. He said he was training for something that will happen in 3 days and that I will have to stay inside. Then he showed me a letter.

2 Days after reading the letter, she couldn’t sleep, because she knew tomorrow will be the last day of the village. Because the letter said that the village was getting raided. For the first time ever the village was getting raided so she made a plan for her escape. When the day came, she was ready to do a plan. The plan was to wait until someone will break the wall and then sneak out to the tunnel. When her plan worked out fine she realised she needs to take someone with her. She stopped suddenly and turned back. She went back for the king.

She couldn’t live with the king because the house was to small. So she built a house for the king. In the house there was a bed, small table and a wardrobe. Every day the king said to the girl.

“Nice to see you”


“HEATHER!” Harry screamed “wait wait, that’s not where it starts!” ??? “ok, I’m Petra but you can call me…narrator” Petra said “In this story I’m the sister, but I’m still the narrator.” She said with a chirp. “So we have Heather she’s 11  from pine vil, Harry age 12 also from Pine vill and Izzy age 11 she’s my sister and from Devon.” Petra explained “OK FROM THE TOP!” she yelled. “So when can we hang out again Heather?” Harry asked “Next week.” She muttered, “NEXT WEEK!? ARE YOU MAD?” Harry asked “your Annoying!” Heather said “so next week” Asked Harry with a squeak. “YES! NOW BYE!” Heather yelled as she ran down the street, “hi Heather!” Izzy yelled with a chirp “How did it go?” She said “Harry’s annoying” Heather said looking angry “Well…he just is that way” Izzy said “He’s in…” Heather said “Well go get him!” She yelled “NO NO NO!”. Izzy pushed Heather to Harry “Oh heather” he chirped “Your in” she said quietly “YAY!” Harry screamed. “It had been a year since they met, and now they are at an old rail way station” the narrator quoted “well…are you going in or not? “Yeah go on!” Izzy prompted “Fiiiiiiiiinnnnnnneeeeee” Heather groaned “YAY!” they yelled happily, Heather turned on the torch and started walking inside at first the tunnel wasn’t too dark, but then it got darker and darker. All of a sudden, so,etching moved in the dark “H-Harry…Izzy?” Heather whispered, there was no response, A creature stepped forward “AHHHHHHHHH!” Heather screamed, she then passed out “Hehe” the creature laughed like she was even more evil. Heather woke up and the tunnel was really bright, Heather ran out screaming. “MONSTER! THERE WAS A MONSTER!” Heather shouted “Don’t be ridiculous!” Harry snapped “Harry! We fight monsters think about it!” “Your right..” Harry groaned “ok what did it look like?” Izzy asked in a soft voice “it was all black….” Heather answered “let’s all go in..” Harry insisted “mhm” Heather and Izzy both said, They all got close and wondered into the tunnel. They reached the end of the silent, gloomy tunnel and saw a black wall, “ok so who’s touching it?” Harry asked “not me!” They all said at the same time “last to step back touches it!” Harry said eager, Heather was the last to step back she sighed and went up to the sad looking black wall, she put her hand up against the wall, “cold…” she said. All of a sudden she fell through “AHHHHHHH!” Heather screamed “HEATHER!” The two friends yelled “OH LOOK WHTA YOU DID YOU MEAT LOFE!” Izzy yelled “well don’t be mad at me now, we have to save Heather!” Harry reminded, “oh no, your right!” Izzy said worried. “They both jumped in and found Heather.” The narrator narrated. “Heather, why are you geared up?” Harry asked, before Izzy could say anything Heather shoved them in a bush and then joined them “what was that for?!” Harry yelled angrily “Shhhh” Heather said pointing at the guards, “I know who’s behind this, Doctor darkness” Heather explained “I see..” Izzy said “ok we need a costume!”Izzy exclaimed “Yes we do..” Heather said “Well..well.WELL!” Said ??? “DOCTOR DARKNESS!” Heather, Harry and Izzy exclaimed angrily, “Your to late to stop me this time!” Exclaimed “I have already activated my machine! “ATACK!” Heather yelled “HARRY YOU GO STOP THE MACHINE, REMEMBER ITS ALWASY THE RED BUTTON! Heather commanded and advised “ok!” Harry yelled as he ran inside “GAUDS, LOWER THE GATE!” Doctor darkness commanded “rats!” Harry said “air vent” he thought looking smug. “So he took off the panel and crawled through and trust me it was NOT pleasant” the narrator  explained “they need to clean that air vent” Harry thought “ok the red button” he thought again. He punched at the red button and then the machine turned off. “TURN IT BACK ON RIGHT NOW!” Doctor darkness bellowed “how about NO!” Harry sassed “grrrrr” Doctor darkness said “or….your friends go in there…” he said pointing to a water tank, before anything else could happen Harry slapped Doctor Darkness and untied them “easy” Harry sassed “yes!” Heather and Izzy chanted “I WILL BE BACK SOME DAYYYYYYY!” Doctor darkness yelled “and as if” Heather said “yes” Ozzy said agreeing. “The land disappeared and the friends were just standing in the back of the tunnel” said the narrator “was it a dream?” Heather asked “I don’t think so..” Said Izzy.

The magic dog 🐶 at can talk

As soon as she walked through the tunnel. She couldn’t help that her heart ❤️ was racing faster than the wind. She was excited at the same throw. She thought it was beautiful because it was made out of flowers and leaves. Then she started to run to the end to see what was there it was a lovely door with a Golden Handel and the door had a flower paten on it. When she touched it. It was glowing she thought it was calling her. So she opened it really carefully.
As Cleo walked into a lovely  called  dream Topie she could see every one was dancing 💃🏼 and having fun with there friends. Cleo walked to the trees they felt soft and fluffy she thought she was in a dream but it was real she felt another tree and it felt rough like a real tree. She new she isn’t in the city any more she was in a new land. Cleo started to explore the town. All there food tasted so good she could eat it for days.
She loved to play but there activities wore a little bit different they played don’t step in the chocolate and one thing that is the same is dancing and singing. The lovely weather most of the time was sunny and never hailed. The were never happens here every one lives forever.
When cleo walked over to a cute dog 🐶 Cleo said “you are so cute what is your name”? The dog said “my name is buddy what is yours” “my name is Cleo “I love 💕 this land so much”. Buddy look like a little fluff ball. Cleo just realised what breed it is.It is  cocker poo they are really hyper and 100% friendly. Cleo said “can you please give me a tor of this land”. Buddy said “Of course there is so much to see here you will love it”.

As soon as Buddy started the car he took Cleo to the cave it was amazing. She went deeper and deeper into the cave. She heard a drum, she was Wondering what is happening then she saw her family and friends. She was filled with joy. Then she  realise it was a illusion. Then 2 no 3 no 5 no 10 was coming from all directions they wore trap. They told us they wanted to  escape this  Beautiful land and they wanted to now how she did it. Buddy quickly said “run” She jumped up and ran for it.

Cleo and Buddy just mange to escape then they ran as fast as there legs can go. Cleo said with a tired voice “why do they want my  Secret of how I got here”.Buddy said “I don’t now”. Both of them wore really curious Cleo said “There is no time to stop they are after us”. They both was as Scared as cats 🐱 in water. Buddy said “we can’t just sit here waiting for them to go we have to fight back”. Cleo said “you are right we have to do it we have no choice do we”. They started to fight and 10 minutes later they won Cleo said “I have to go home now. My mum my dad also my brother and my dog 🐶 at is also called Buddy and he is a cocker poo and she made a promise at she will come bake.

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Travel the world with us and you’ll never regret it, we will be travelling to lots and lots of countries and we’ll be seeing lots of things that you’ve never seen before! So pack you bags and join the Roman Army today!

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Are you prepared to take on your fears with a deadly, sharp spear, well the Roman army is for you. Within this great army you will experience the adventures of a life time. If your brave enough you can battle the greatest of your enemies and feel proud of what you accomplished. As well as that you can become a hero that is remembered during history. So come and see all your dreams come true in the Roman army, were waiting for your arrival!

If you wanna be buff this is the best place to do that. We got armour all size large or small, but you must work for it. For you to get the armour you must train, when you get it you will get the powerful armour. Don’t worry if your armour breaks, we have a endless amount of supply which will keep you with armour. If you get in battle your armour will save you from being hurt or even killed. You will be able to defeat your greatest enemies when you go face to face with them.

Travel the world
The Roman army is all for are people we will visit your dreams you have never thought would be real. An extra exercise is when your walking to your destination you will carry heavy stuff to keep you fit every day. You will always be protected by a guard or one of your strong friends so you wanna be like them. Your destination could be short or far so always be ready for what’s up next. On the way to your journey we could visit some wonderful places people have never seen before and probably you wouldn’t have seen it.

Were trying to expand and we’re putting a lot of money to people’s hands. So our empire needs building’s and we’re looking for builders to build great big building’s. You can also catch robbers which will give you extra money. We will pay so it’s your chance to get the job or decline the job and money. If you have a tiny amount of money the Roman army is willing to give you up the money you need. Once you join the Roman army it’s your choice or not to get paid or not.

Joining will increase your strength by the training we give you. This training is very important for your body and health. The training will get you through battles out alive and will make you feel better than ever before. People get lazy and don’t do what told but you can be one of the people who survive great and fierce battles. Once again we are waiting for you so you have to join the Roman army.

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When you join you will work with our powerful, healthy men to build courage, strengthen and bravery. You will join the Roman army and we will push you to be the best you can be.The training will be to walk 30 miles with all your equipment.Do you think you can handle it?The Roman army want, a man who is never afraid to go into battle and can fight effectively.

Do you like to go outside or do you dream of being a traveller? Then the Roman army is for you, march around our beautiful land and see all the wonders. But that’s not all you can camp under a clear night sky. Just imagine setting your tent under the dazzling night sky, lighting the warm, bright fire. But that’s not all, you can go hunting and shear the food with your tent buddies. That’s right you have tent buddies. Remember you will be travelling for 25 years.

We have spears, swords, shields and more in the Roman army, when you join you will be provided with the finest top notch equipment. Our equipment is crafted with care, by the best crafters in all of Rome. The equipment can be used to stab, jab and deflect attacks, it can also save your life. As well as using your equipment to attack you can use it as a tool, that’s right. Use your equipment to cut and chop. Remember our weapons are very sharp.

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The Digestive System

It all began on an old ,sharp , rusty  fork into the snake like toung  grabbed the chewy piece of meat it ripped and tore loudly. The teeth were as white as snow and as sharp as a blade

Down goes the gooey messy food into the black tunnel of darkness  slowly going down  the 25 cm tune

Aggressively getting contracted and pushed  further down the oesophagus  .A slimy  mucus helping the gooey mess on its way  .

Suddenly in that second the food dropped down into the stomach of dread .

Echoing around the dark stock the food is getting attacked by the acid killing all the bacteria .

Wow, the small intestine is 6. 5  .  It is slipping its way to its destiny

Meanwhile the filly mess was rolling slowly  into the large intestine suddenly it begins  soaking the yummy goodness .

Aggressively pushing the semi solid waste called faeces to the colon and rectum

finally the mussels relaxs and push the smelly mess into the toilet

The Digestive Sytem

It all started on a steel , metal fork. When the potatoes were dashing into the slimy mouth an army of clean and white teeth came to chomp down the yellow potatoes. Suddenly a huge tongue came to attack the potatoes and so did the incisors. The incisor were munching on the potatoes but the tongue was licking the potatoes so the mouth can get more taste. when the incisor were done chewing the food the throat loudly swallowed the potatoes.

After going into the dangerous mouth the mini slices of potatoes were pushed by the throat and into the oesophagus. The massive stomach is like a normal sized ball but when it has absolutely nothing in it it turns into a football. It stores massive jumbo meals to. The potatoes zoom into the stomach it releases some juice and plenty of acid. The potatoes were still slipping and sliding towards the system however the acid was still going into the potatoes. As quick as a  cheetah the acid thrashed the little pieces of potatoes and it killed  the dirty,harmful bacteria. Muscles in the stomach combined the potatoes together. Surprisingly , the acid juice destroyed the food and the potatoes became wet soup. The soup was called chyme and the chyme was ready to be launched to the small intestine.

It was such a long time in the stomach the sized of a ball but the potatoes are still melted soup. Amazingly,  the small intestine is at least 6.5 metres long nearly as long at the large intestine. When the potatoes entered the small intestine it was just flowing like it was relaxing. The potatoes was taking its journey slow and steady and when it reached the end it entered the next part of the system.

The Small intestine is nearly as big as the large intestine. So the large intestine job is to suck up things like water , salt and other kinds of minerals. Leftover potatoes were gently rolling into the opposite of the small intestine and the small intestine is 1.5 metres. Roaming into the very last stages of the system  it the half semi solid food waste and junk takes its in adventure rapidly to the tall tower colon. The colon is fighting for its freedom. When someone goes to the poo or toilet  a ring of muscles called the anus it is near the but releases  the stinky poo out which is the potatoes waste.