Upset,bored and lonely – do you feel that way too? Hi my name is Dyllon, and today, I present to you, the portal mirror -a life changing machine to solve you not seeing your friends during isolation. This machine has many features like emoji faces and comes with many designs. Being stuck in your house is a great time to use it. Although we are apart, with the mirror portal we can talk to each other. How could we live without talking to friends?

The portal mirror has been designed simply to talk to your friends face to face in the comfort of your own homes. With just two buttons it is easy to connect up in your house, just plug in a USB and your ready with the use of the most up to date technology. You could buy profiting, clear quality visual and sound quality for up to five calls at once – perfect for family and friends to stay connected. The mirror portal is a slim stationary machine, not only does it come in different colours, but now comes in different patterns: footballs, swirls, glitter, birds, cats, dogs and flowers just to name a few.

What makes this product more useful than making calls and video calls?

Although communicating to your friends and family over calls and video chat has increased in popularity, the portal mirror allows a totally different experience. Not only do you talk to your friends and family,but you can have a virtual reality hug, eat dinner together and play some games. You won’t feel alone with a portal mirror in your house.

When using the mirror portal,is there an option of being able to touch the other person/people?
No, the mirror portal uses a virtual reality technology, therefor you can not physically touch them sadly. This is the best way of us all being safe,but we can still share a hug with those we love.

Well done Dyllon! This is fantastic! I can see you’ve used relative clauses, subordinate clauses and rhetorical questions. I can also see you’ve listened to your feedback and made those changes to your writing! Congratulations on completing your first home learning big write!