LC:to use different sentence structures depending on the formality of writing

Have you ever wondered what it was like all the way the way back in Roman,Anglo Saxon, and tudor times well today if not I will be telling you all about them. Moods towards crime and punishment have changes insanely  through the


years. What different factors have led to strict rules and varied of the past. One really different thing about then and now is that back then if you stole an apple you would get whipped but now if you did you would just  be told not to do it again. So the difference is so crazy back then.People would think it is okay to steal but then again it is never right to steal anything even if it is just a apple . Because people at shops go to spend there money like I said to put food  and drinks on the shelves for other people to  eat and drink so if you shop lifted before you are taking food that people spend there money on for you. DONT STEAL!

Roman period

In the Roman times the most common crime that was committed was Theft. Because 45million plus people  lived there it was super smelly and damp and overall a very dangerous and dirty place to be at. Well so many people thought that it was ok to do a crime that was small to do but they were clearly wrong because no crime was okay to do on any level. It is still a really bad thing to do even if it is just stealing an apple it is still a horrible thing to do it is called shoplifting when you steal from a shop.shoplifting well is not good at all because it is stealing from the person who spend loads of money to put food and drinks for people to get to survive. So always remember to not steal or ever do a crime.

Anglo-saxon

years on years  ago people believed that a crime called treason was the worst crime you could do and they were no wrong. Treason was when you did not listen to the king or the law. Some people would not even listen to God, that is so mean so therefore the punishment was well… Execution which was seen the worst punishment possible and could happen by causing treason or murdering enough person Execution in the end could kill a person!

Tudor times
Believe it or not in Tudor times I know this is going to sound weird but he worst crime was begging. Which in my opinion was really unfair because to this day people are still begging for money to be able to get a home for theirselves and for people to see that as a crime is just really mean when all they had to do was just give them some money to brighten up their days! The most common punishment back in Tudor times was a whipping you could get this by stealing an apple from a shop so shoplifting basically.

Victorian
In the years of the 1920s the police were introduced but they were originally called the vigilles which were a little group of people who got the police to actually exist to this day. Back then the vigilles were very new to being police but now days the police can handle anyone or anything. The vigilles were still very good at what they did and I am thankful for the vigilles to create police because now if there were no police it could have leaded to crimes being allowed which should never happen and has never been allowed. For a very good reason as well it is because there would be much more deaths probably lots of people stealing and it would honestly be really bad. The world would feel really bad and not safe. So that is what is what it would be like without the police. In the world life’s are saved by the police which is fonominal. In my mind nobody should even think about murdering someone because it is probably the worst crime possible to commit.

World war2
World war 2 started in 1939 and was when you would fight for your country risking your own life to save other people life’s which I think is super nice to do people In the war well fifty fifty people probably made it out alive which is really sad. Also another sad part is how long your there and your family might just say goodbye not knowing one hundred percent he will come back it must be so scary. But if they make it back alive I can just imagine how happy the family would be to see them again. Everybody who goes to the war must be scared also but knowing they would keep there country and there family safe from doing it probably make him feel ten times happier than they were. Some people well the majority of people go to the war and someone may through or shoot someone and there leg and arm could come of from it. So I really appreciate the people who go to the war to save well us? When they do not even know who we are probably so that is why I appreciate world war fighters, for saving us and keeping us safe however you risking your life for us I can still just not believe they would do that for us strangers. 1 more thing I need to say is that in the war a person wrote a poem in the war about the war and then sadly got killed so I just respect everybody in the war who was fighting for us and our country.

Opinion
My opinion about all the crimes and the punishments for them is a bit unfair because if someone did not believe in God back then it was seen as a really bad thing and you could be killed for doing it. When it just someone’s opinion. And for stealing an apple you could get a really hard whipping well when now you would just get tolled not to do it ever again and then they could just go that easily. So I think most of the punishments for the crimes can sometimes not be fair at all because there was this story where this guy tried to help his family and then he go put to death for it.THE END!I hope you learned a lot more about Romans Tudor Victorian world war and Anglo-Saxons today so I think that most of the punishments for the crimes were mostly unfair.

Brandon some good facts in this writing but two major things to improve- sentence punctuation throughout and your level of fomality needs to be improved.

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