In the weekend when I was snoring I heard my mom knocking and I remembered today is my mother’s birthday and I hated my mom and I said happy birthday to my mother then my mom side to me we need to go to church and I brush my teat and went to church and came bake when me and my sister playing to gather then a knock on the door when we open the door and there are friends and we have the cake.

A good blog but read through and write clearly in sentences using capital letters and full stops.

Yesterday my Granma gave me and my sister loads fo sweets from  India. We ate only one sweet.   We  wanteed more sweets.Then my Granma said to us I will make star keychain for us because she is good at making things.

A very nice piece of blogging , Jessica. Always use a dictionary to help you spell unknown words.