In the weekend when I was snoring I heard my mom knocking and I remembered today is my mother’s birthday and I hated my mom and I said happy birthday to my mother then my mom side to me we need to go to church and I brush my teat and went to church and came bake when me and my sister playing to gather then a knock on the door when we open the door and there are friends and we have the cake.

A good blog but read through and write clearly in sentences using capital letters and full stops.