As the smoke cleared i could see a red figure. Suddenly it turned around ! i started walking towards it …my heart sank to my stomach because i was terrified.
This figure that i saw walked towards me it was a VAMPIRE i ran towards my house and headed inside luckily i locked all the doors in my house .Then i closed the curtains and sat on my bed after a few minutes i fell asleep. An hour later i woke up and i thought that the vampire was gone so i walked downstairs
what do you think will happen next?
I like that you have ended with a question – it makes me think about different endings. Next time, I think you need to look at your punctuation. I should be a capital letter!