For my holiday I Cornwall . The sea was totally rocking !My hotel was on the a path that on the opposite road you could see the sea . On the first day, I went to look around the garden in the after noon , and , as a bonus there was really nice people with some really friendly dogs . I met at least 4 dogs . Oh but the best bit was that a butterfly was stranded and I got to hold it for a really long time .But the bit that suck was that on the way home it took 2 million hours to get-back !
Well done for managing 100 words! I think you could make this even better by avoiding using nice! Can you find a synonym?
um …. er…mm mm ….probably ….. SPECTACTULER !