I am living a great life last Sunday was my birthday I had so much fun and my favourite present was a games table and a punching bag at 12 aclook I had my best friend come round my house me and my friend whent to bounce after bounce me and my friend played at my house for 2 hours that’s whatI did for my birthday I loved my birthday 🎁
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