Survival Guide

To all people including children and adults,

In order to help the hospitals,nurses and doctors,we need to stop spreading germs and stay healthy .To do this ,we must:

*Wash our hands with soap and water to prevent any bacteria to go anywhere else.

*DO NOT touch your,EYES,MOUTH and ANYBODY else * Do not COUGH or SNEEZE at other PEOPLE

*When sneezing or coughing make sure to cover your nose and mouth to make sure not to spread any germs

*Use hand sanitiser if you can’t wash your hands at that time *

The limit of time you have to wash your hands is the same as singing ‘Happy birthday to you’ twice,20 seconds

* Eat lots of fruits and vegetables that include Vitamin C

* Stay 2 meters from each other

*Dont go outside if really important

Make sure to follow these instructions.

 

Well done Hannah. A comprehensive list of things to do to stay well. I like the way you have used bullet points to illustrate each fact too.

How to survive in lockdown

This year covid 19 hit the earth a started killing people so all the schools closed down making people stay at home. This Guide will help you by telling you things to do.

In the morning at 9am go on YouTube to watch joe Wicks

Find games like snakes and ladders or heads down thumbs up.

If you are low on food and drinks get someone from your family to go to the shops and get some food and drinks but tell them to not over shop and leave food for other people.

If you have a pet like a cat or dog play with it in your garden or if it’s a cat indoors.

If you what to learn a magic trick that makes some fun go to this website https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DrHnc-CuRHA

If you want to do something in you back yard plant fruit seeds and flowers.

If it’s raining watch your favourite movie on Netflix, Disney+ or amazon prime.

If you are tied put relaxing music on and relax in your bed

 

Well done,Corey. I really like your advice. You have added a range of things to do to keep fit physically, mentally, to improve your home and garden as well as for relaxing.

 

 

 

 

How to survive lockdown

            How to survive lockdown

    Since the UK has entered lockdown in 23rd March, many people are wondering how to survive 
lockdown. This text will give you information about what you need to do in order to get through
lockdown without being infected of coronavirus.
    
    The first step is to always stay at home, you have heard the NHS say, "Stay home, save
lives." several times. This is because you might have coronavirus in the past 2 weeks without
knowing and can infect about 3 people! Imagine the whole human population going outside if they
are infected (1,000,000), that will be 3 million people infected and they will not know! Make 
sure to stay away 2 meters from people as the NHS suggests, this will make the dust particles 
not reach you.

    But what if you need to desperately go outside? The NHS says you are allowed to go outside
if it is desperate. This includes: going grocery shopping, doing exercise or essential travel.
But do not go outside to visit family or friends as they may have Covid-19 without knowing!
My advice is to only go shopping twice a week, as many grocery stores might be crowded.

   How do I prevent it? First of all, drinking water will help you stay hydrated. Next, do not
forget you can stay in touch with family and friends over the phone or on social media, to help
you avoid feeling low or lonely. After that, try to build hobbies. You can cook, practice
a new instrument or try new activities. Do enough exercise, if you feel well.
   
   What are the symptoms of Covid-19? The first symptom is showing high temperature, this
means it is hot to touch your chest or back (you do not need to measure your temperature.)
Second is a continuous cough, you may have these at-least 3 times a day as a cough episode or
coughing for more than an hour. A shortness of breath is common with these symptoms, that means
you will have difficulty breathing. Many serious cases may lead to pneumonia, which can cause
death.

Daivam, you know lots about the coronavirus and have written these well in this piece. You have 
organised your work into paragraphs and into sentence clusters about the same subject. Well done!

Life during lockdown…

Dear diary,

Life had been miserable during these days in lockdown…I felt as if I was trapped like a bird in an unforgiving cage.When I heard the news that we were going to be doing work at home, I was excited and jumping up and down like a monkey.However things did not go the way I had expected.

On the first day,I still had a wide open smile to wake up and live the new life I was given. I naturally woke up at 7:20 as usual because that is the time for school days( for some reason my body follows this rule to wake up at the right time).Ate breakfast and went to my desk. I opened seesaw and did the work (however there was technical difficulties), soon I had lunch with my family.At the dinning table, everybody was energetic and lively.When I had finished my meal, my older sister (21years old) came up to me and …BIT ME…she has an addiction to bite people ( she once made my cousin bleed massively when they were children ). Without a doubt, a sibling war began…My mom is usually on my side though. I ate dinner and went to sleep.Nothing could go wrong when sleeping right?During the midnight, I felt a shiver down my spine and realized that my sister had stolen my blanket. I didn’t mind so I tried to pull it back however it didn’t work. I was too scared to actually take it back as I know the next morning, my sister would be fractious and tell my mom the opposite story.So as a typical Qian Qian, I slept shaking all night.

On the second day of lockdown, I was tired unlike the day before. Woke up at 8:19 surprisingly.

On the third day of lockdown, I felt like I had lost my soul. Woke up at 9:45 this time.

On the forth day of lockdown, I woke up at 10:34 . I went down the stairs like a drunk person world. Trembling and wobbling down the stairs, I was desperate for some fresh air and to walk outside.

On the fifth of lockdown, I woke up at 12:39 and skipped breakfast to eat lunch. At my working desk, I was tried and so I decided to do the work later. My mom forced me to go to the garden to  redeem my stamina. It helped. Fresh air… Although I couldn’t walk properly anymore, I wanted to go for a walk. My mom said that I am not allowed out as the infectious virus is also taking a walk outside.

After a week, today I am writing this soulless and miserable at my working desk. Eyes almost closed, body is weak, my fingers are squishing on the iPad screen like a worm dancing.I want the life back. Hopefully there is a end to this soon and I can escape this lifestyle.Although I am exercising now to recover, there is a lot to be done.(Right now my mom had just got a food delivery and she has gloves on, mask on, antibacterial spray equipped and ready to fight the delivery box.She said that we must leave the box for a week to let the bacteria die.)

Lockdown is not a joke…

 

Qian Qian, I am always excited to read your writing and this is no exception. Your level of description, sentence structures and tone in your writing is inspiring.  I completely agree with you about Lockdown and know, for me too, it is a very different, disorientating time.  If writing helps you to stay focussed and sane, please, please keep blogging about anything or everything.  Keep it up- you could publish one day!

Lockdown by livia

Life is very hard for everyone right now especially ones that are sick. We are all in lockdown because of the coronavirus. This virus is a new virus that has been found that’s why everyone is freaking out right now. They say they might find a cure in a year but we never know what the future holds, we might get a cure before that time but, on the other hand we might not but, we need to keep our positive thoughts.

Coronavirus is taking over the world right now, everyone could catch it. It spreads person to person very quickly so we can’t go out and see our friends even our family that don’t live with you. This is why we need to stay at home and be safe, we only need to go out to buy necessary things like food and things to help you with hygiene.

There are many things you could do during lockdown, you could do some exercises in your garden, colour, read books, bake and build a blanket tent. There are loads of cool and fun things to keep you happy during this difficult time everyone is going through at this moment in life.

Exercises in your back garden or house are very useful to do right now because everyone has to sit inside many gyms and exercise places are also closed because of this so we all need to take care of our bodies at home.

I have been doing lots of things with my family like baking, playing games and much more. I love FaceTiming or texting my friends to still be in contact with them and if their feeling well and heathy.

 

Excellent writing, Livia with some very well written fats about all our ives at the moment. I particularly like your positive message at the end about how to keep healthy and occupied with your list of things we can all do. Well done!

Survival guide

We have all been in lockdown for some weeks now.If you want to know how to survive in lockdown here are some ideas for you that you could do while at home.

  • You could do things that you love like painting,drawing,baking and other stuff like that.
  • If you have a trampoline you go on that do some tricks.
  • If you have a back garden you could play around or do some exercise.
  • You could go on electronics if you want.
  • You could play game with your sisters and brothers or your mum and dad like uno,jenga and games like that.

Here are some rules to follow if you want to keep safe.

  • You should always wash you hands after you went to the toilet.
  • You should wash your hands before you eat and after you eat to make sure they are clean.
  • When you sneeze put the tissue in the bin and wash your hands.
  • When you also cough wash your hands too and keep safe.
  • If you do all of they rules you will be safe.Make sure you do something active to keep you moving.

 

Evelyne, very well done. I love your overall message of staying moving and healthy and you have set your writing out in an appealing way using subheadings and bullet points.

Biography of L. Frank Baum

Early life and childhood

 

On the fifteenth of may , 1856, in New York Lyman Frank Baum was born , the grate orthur was confined to the for walls of hi bed room because his hart did not form properly at birth as he once said , ” Never give up … no one knows whats going to happen “.This did not stop him.he did not play with other children as i said he did stay in his room which when he was in there  he rote books that was his favored thing to do and he loved it .

 

Family

 

L Frank Baum was born into a wealthy family his dad was a barrel manufacture he had for brothers and three sisters witch is a lot of siblings .because he had such a wealthy family that means he when to a military school but because he had a existing heart problem he was only able to atened his military school for two years .

 

Middle age and books

 

In his middle age his book writing sciles started of and he started publishing books . most  non book was wizard of oz , witch was published in 1900.his books reached all around the world and now every one had herd ,read or seen the wonderful wizard of oz .but mosed people new the it as Americas first fairy tail.

 

The movie

 

the movie for the wizard of oz was made in 1914 it was a hit susses the movie captured the imagination of thousuns of children and even teens and adults . the movie consisted of seven main charictors with Dorthy at the center . the carictors were Dorthy,cowardly lion , skear crow, tin man, witch of the west ,sorceress of the south and the wizard of oz.

 

later life and death

 

the last book he wrote before he died was the” Glinda of oz ” his hart condition got wers and wers  and in 1919 he sadly died (he was a gate arther)

l.frank baum

Early life

L. frank Baum was born in the 15th may 1856

at a early age l. frank Baum had a heart condition witch meant he could not play like the other kids. This meant he only had three years at military school because of the condition he had. He liked to make storeys for him and his friends. He lived in a house with his mother and his father. He also lived with some of his 4 brothers and his 3 sisters. He was one of eight children.

His jobs/Early career

l. frank Baum had multiple jobs like a employee at a locale convene store And  many other job titles as such. He also had a job at his dads theater- He even wrote his own play called “the maid of arran” a musical play.

Marriage

he was married in 1882 ton Marries Mand. her mother a head in the women’s writes march.

Mid life

His father died in 1890. making his mother and him devastated from hearing this news but he know he had to keep on going on and he crated a book called the wizard of oz  he published the wizard of oz in 1900 after his fathers death 11 years prier to the book being published after it was published he made a line in the book a quote saying ” there’s no place like home “.

 

Children

He had 4 kids frank josh Baum, rebert station Baum ,harry real Baum and kethren  gage Baum.

HE DIED 5TH MAY 1919 AGE 62

Liam Baldwin

 

 

 

 

 

 

LC:to use developed noun phrases to add detail to sentences.

Ansel Adams was born  the 20 Th Feb 1902  he was famous for photographing nature  at its  best with a black and white camera . he commonly photographed new mexico and Yosemite national park .

the pitcher titled  “canyon de national monument ” realy stands out mainly because of the black and white camera i think that typ of camera realy makes the groves of the canun stand out . you can see that he has yoused the rue of three on his photo the main mountain  is in the middle and he has put another mountain no the left so i t dose not look bear . in the for ground there is the mountain   to the left   in the mid ground is the remains of a river and a mountain and in the back ground is the cloud’s.

The other picture that i like is ” The Tetons and the snake ” i think at its name is cool because the snake is soposed to be the river  as it cervs and the tetons are the mountains .he has made the photo in a way that  the river disapiares .

i prefer the grande canune one better than eny other photo because it has so much ditial and i love the faced that he could ues color .

Some good descriptions used today to describe Ansel’s work.  You have thought careful in how you describe the landscapes.

Check and change key spellings in your writing and make sure each sentence makes sense.  

monday 2nd march 2020 lc to use develop noun phrases to add detail to sentences

Ansel Adams was born the 20th of February 1902.

he was famous for his photograph and despite his time when he could of got a new coloured  camera but he chose a black and white one instead. He was the one to make photograph a art form before photos were not thought as a art form but just a picture. but Ansel Adams made it the art form it is now. then it was his art form and it still is his art form. thanks to him it is now a actually art form.

 

In 1941 Ansel Adams went to lake Ellery in sierra Nevada in the picture there is the rule of thirds being used he thought the ice on the lake in the mid ground and the back ground. As well as that there is also some trees in the bottom  right corner of the photograph. And some mountains and some hills in the photograph as well in the back ground.

 

After a year, Ansel Adams created a photograph of the Canyon de Chelly national monument in Arizona there is a    semi mounting in the middle of the canyon. The canyon is wrapt around by a smooth stone witch aperies there was a river or a lake there once.

 

I liked that in the first picture there was a mounting there but I liked the massive mounting in the middle of the picture they are both very wonderful pinchers in there own way like the first picture  had a small mounting in it at the top and in the second Picture there was a huge rocky cliff in the middle of the photograph and I prefer the seconded picture because it has more in it.

 

Ansel Adams died 22nd of April 1984

Liam Baldwin

Some good use of noun phrases to describe and some different sentence structures used.

Add more details to some sentences to fully explain each point.