Month: June 2020

My hopes and aspirations

By 13lexieb

I’m when I am older, I want to be a footballer.This is because I love doing football and I’m very good at it. Also,I would like to be a dancer because dancing is my favourite thing to do and it makes me so happy .I dream of one of these careers because I really love to do them and I think it will keep me happy and healthy. I can achieve to be a footballer by studying biology and PE when I’m older. I can achieve to be a dancer by going to dancing clubs and practicing everyday. Also, if I do become a dancer, I will be very good at it because I already have the KEY skill to dancing,I have flexibility.This is because I used to be a gymnast for 3 or 4 years and I got very good at it and I was very flexible.Also if I was a footballer, I would also be very good at it because I have the KEY skill,I have strong feet and legs and lots of feet control.This is because the 2 years I have been doing football and the 2-3 years I was doing swimming.I hope to  do one of these things when I’m older. That would be a dream come true!

Wonderful writing, Lexie.  You have described each of these careers well and explained why you woud be excellent at them.

Hopes and Aspirations

By 13vickyb

As I am moving up to secondary school, I really hope to make new friends and experience something new. In addition, I would like to    be able to explore a variety of new subjects and meet different people.

One of the main things I’d like to achieve during school is to earn good grades on all my tests, including my GCSE. As a result of this, all my scores will be passed on to my college, which will help me in my future career. In order to pass all my exams, I must focus in lessons, complete all my work properly and eventually study extra at home. It is good to learn because it will become easier for you in the future.

After I finish secondary school, I am planning to go to college and university. This is because I want to expand my knowledge and, once again, experience something new.

When I finally graduate, it will be time to set off to work. My dream job is to become a famous actress who performs in musicals / fantasy films. Acting, singing, dancing and playing the piano have been my passion for a very long time now and I truly think that I deserve this job. I honestly feel passionate about my talent, and I want to continue my career professionally.

If I had the possibility, I’d also like to learn how to drive because in that way I would be able to travel where and when I like. My favourite car is probably a Porsche or a B&W. If I earn enough money, I would like to get one of these cars.

At last, I wish to owe a house and have my very own family.

Super writing, Vicky. You have used a range of sentence types and a wide range of punctuation in this writing.  You have also shown deep thinking andd a clear vision of your hopes and dreams for the future.