In the day Emma and Snow were sill looking for that monster then sudleuy  the monster jumptd from bined a tree and cashed the little girls back home when the girls were in the house safe there were vrery hugrey so there ate the biggist cholate cake in the whoel  wied wold .    the next day the girls set out agan  but that time there bouert some spllies with them so there can chaet the monster and this is what there bouete a net a blakit with the net in it the girls hided bhiend a bushe in the foset the monster was comeing there hred a lot of foot septs the same thing happed anain but the girls just not quike enfeof to get away from thos monsters so the monsters ate the girls and the girls were never seen again thire mother and father are very worrid about them aftey a few days later there had some tiws and there grew up into me so then there set out to find a lovly fowly grdene  but little did there kowe that the fower graned was owend by

 

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