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The adventures of Jelly- LC:T12 To use character, dialogue and action to advance events in narrtive writing.

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One on a snow cold stormy day, Jelly woke up in the mansion named “Robust Mansion” where he lived with his friends, Slogo (Josh) Kwebblekop (Jordi). Kwebblekop and Slogo made fun of Jelly and as Jelly is shorter and other pay tubers made fun of him. Many other pay tubers say he doesn`t know how to count and he did not go to school (which he did go to school) Kwebellkop, Slogo and Jelly made a gang called “Robusts” They made things fun.

It was 23rd of December 2016, it was stormy, wet, cold and there were horizon of snow falling down, the robust gang went out and they were just having fun in the snow until, there were a frozen up pond as you might find in Antarctica. Slogo and Kwebellkop pushed Jelly on it he fell through, Slogo was pulling on him, saying “Haha that is where you belong!” Kwebellkop smiled and leaned down to Jelly “Come up Jelly the short man.” Jelly replied “I can not reach help please!” They both lifted up Jelly, the city shock, there were this bridge, half taken down… A man called “Mike” Slogo talked to him, “Hey man, can we pass?” He replied “Yes you 3 may, my name is Mike but I wear a mask for skin condition (But, he were lying…) They all there went back to the robust mansion. It was 4pm so they all decided to play Minecraft mods and they made 2 videos (as they upload 2 videos per day on pay tube). They all got 100,000 likes and 101,000 views but Jelly had 2,000,000 likes and 2,000,000 views. Slogo got more pay subs by 10 so now he has 7,120,000 pay subs and Jelly had increased by 2,000,000 so now he has 18,444,442 pay subs. Kwebellkop increased by 10,000 so know he has 10,170,000. It was 11pm they all went to bed…

It was the next day, they was going to be making a vlog but, someone knocked on the door, the wan was jumping up and down as he shock Slogo pushed the door open. Slogo said “Hello, who are you and what do you want?! He replied quietly “quick! I need you all to go and adventure!” They talked about the details… Jelly, Slogo and Kwebellkop got changed into some camo adventure gear they had been given, Kwebellkop had to wear a girls one. Jelly and Slogo was making weird funny faces…. They all set of but Kwebellkop sneakily ran home they had go pros on they were doing vlogs, Kwebellkop hacked into the go pros and watched… The snow had lost some of its strength and it was warmer then it was before, they left the town the town was called pigs worth the mayor was called mayor pigs worth.. They only had found out it were a troll, Kwebellkop rushed and picked them up, Jelly and Slogo kicked Kwebellkop out of the group made a new friend called Cranier, Kwebellkop moved out they kicked him out. They did not they never seen him never met….

A very inventive story with lots of imagination.  Check through for sentence punctuation and also write an interesting Hook” sentence or short paragraph to open your story.

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