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Driving around, seeing the same houses being built over and over again, the same gardens and parking spots: is this not mundane! Are you not tired of this? 100% of houses on a street are exactly the same; people once in their life or never get to have a house that is designed by their own ideas or tastes. The more awful architects out there, the more they will continue with this through the years. However, is it worth it? Imagine a world where you can get a house design with everything you want, this is the future now we are able to do that at an affordable price. Only we are able to these. Together! Are you with me? Do you want to join the future?

 

Drago Design wants to design your future house, by your own tastes. This company will revolutionise your experience of home living and will create the perfect personalised home, designed by the best architects. As people start to move house more and more, they can get a design that will be the design they always wanted. After they get the design of their house, they can build their dream house. With you coming to our company, there is not going to be a problem or idea too big or too small; we will still design your house with everything you want in it. For many people, the hardest thing about starting to make a design is the cost of it, and that is where we come in. Our house designs are at half price each than the usual ones. However, if you buy two house designs, you get the VAT off of both of them. Drago Design will charge ยฃ16,300 for a small house design, ยฃ28,400 for a medium house design, and ยฃ61,600 for a large house design. My company likes to offer our customers more chances of affording a house design. To find out more visit www.dragodesign.housedesign.com there you can book appointments and find out how to get a design.

 

This is just the start of Drago Design! As the company grows and more people want a design, we will be able to start designing more plans and make our customer’s designs quicker and more complex! I fully believe that if we are ready to get many customers and raise the money, my company will be able to create another company to build the houses. If you already trust Drago Design, then you will trust the next company. If you agree with my company, if you believe that it is trustworthy, if you believe that I am right and the houses are looking the same, then you have the chance of having your own house design specialised for your tastes. Thank you for listening to me explaining my company; I hope that you are as excited as I am.

Well done Andrei! You have worked hard to use the Y6 skills and persuasive techniques to engage your reader. A superb display of your writing; well done!ย 

The other parents

As Coraline mysteriously got attracted by the avalanche of different colors, she started crawling through the tunnel to the other door which was slightly open. When she arrived at the other end, she felt a bit scared and nervous as she saw the room looking better than in the real world. Then, after she came to the other world, she heard singing in the kitchen. This has never happened ever in her life. Getting closer and closer, Coraline saw her mother in the kitchen cooking but she didn’t know that she was her other mother. When she turned around, Coraline was shocked to see her other mother wearing buttons instead of eyes, so Coraline shouted at her and told her that she is not her real mother. The other mother laughed and told Coraline who she really was she also told her to go to get her other father to dinner she said that he was in his office. Walking into the office, Coraline could see that her father’s office was all magical and neat but there was one thing that made Coraline worry, she knew that her father didn’t know how to play the piano, but her other dad said that the piano played him!

Interesting description Andrei! You have explored using adverbials to extend your ideas! Well done.ย 

Is it okay to gift someone a dragon, if it could help them one day?

For the past week, we started focusing on an image where the king gifts his children a dragon, as it will help them in the future to rule and rise the kingdom. This has made us discuss if it is okay to gift somebody a dangerous pet if it will help them one day?

Having a dragon as a gift to your children is a really outrageous idea for some people, but if the dragon is a baby and grows older, gets trained, and gets to think that the children are his family, then he will want to keep them safe and listen to them. As people say that dragons make loads of damage, what if they were under attack and didn’t have a dragon, the damage will be 10 times worse. This is why having a dragon is a good and safer idea!

Following on from my point, if you have a dragon pet he doesn’t just have to save you from attacks, he can also give you rides all over the world if you want to. He will play games with you and he will only do that if he doesn’t feel under attack. If you always wanted to travel all over the world, then you can agree with me that it is okay for the king to have bought his children a dragon.

There are many compelling arguments against, but there are many positive thoughts that can cancel the negative ones. Therefore you might agree with me, having a dragon is the best possible idea you could ever have. What is your opinion on having a dragon?

Well done Andrei! A well-written discussion text where you make your points clearly and concisely. You have experimented with Y6 sentence types and powerful language to engage your reader.ย 

This is me!

Talents

My talents are to draw and build. When I was young, I would always build structures, for example: apartments, houses, bridges and barns. As I grew, I also found my talent in art and I started developing my skills for art and my imagination. After a few years, I discovered that I can combine them and maybe in he feature be an architect. That is when I started drawing houses and loads more. I still practice to get better and better until I reached the highest standard, from this I started to put more detail like plants, shapes of windows and textures. These skilled drawings help the builders to know how the houses should look.

Loves & Passions

As I get older and I am going to be at secondary, I want to improve my knowledge: spellings, grammar, science, handwriting and other things I am not really good at. I am going to take my passions to another level, my passions are to draw and build, the same as my talents. When I will have time, I will do whatever it takes to improve my passions. My passions make me feel relaxed because I will surely get a job with them. If I didn’t have the passion for art and building anymore, I wouldn’t beย  able to do certain things with passion because I would’t enjoy it anymore.

Hope

When I get older, I hope to get my diploma in architecture. After that, I want to get a good job, build a house and buy a dog and a horse.I also wish to have a family and go to different places around the world. I also want my house in a quieter, where there isn’t too much pollution or noise. As a hobby, I want to be a go cart racer. In the winter I want to have a log cabin near a skiing trakย  so that every morning we can go skiing.

Anti virus

Hello my name is Andrei. Today I am going to show you the Anti-virus machine – this machine is made to catch the the deadliest viruses and destroy them. There are millions of them and if you use this machine, you can destroy them easily. Amazingly, this will do it by a mixture of two different liquids and 2 different gases meeting together that will make a small pop to alert you that it is gone. This machine is a lifesaving one. Don’t you want all the viruses to disappear? Then this invention is made for you.

The Anti virus was designed to be cheap for every body to buy it; it works perfectly. In 2020’s summers, we’re going to send over 3 billion of this machine all over the world. If something goes wrong, I am willing to help. And, as I said, the price is cheap: it will cost around 5-10 pounds, but the fabrication cost to make 1 million is around ยฃ5,000, this is because most of the things are found in nature. The design of this machine is technically a bigger camera with loads of mechanisms and chemicals inside it and a big tube coming from the front to catch the virus.If all of the chemicals and all of the gases meet together, it will take a second for the virus to disappear, and if you hear a pop then it is done. We also made this machine for blind people that can’t hear the pop, so that when it pops, a light shows.

How will your machine make the world a better place?ย 

Although we have medicine, for some of the diseases we don’t have any. Instead of taking medicines and having pain, you can just get rid of the viruses before they get to you. Also, in the future, when we are going to have millions of diseases that won’t have a cure, this machine will stop it from affecting the human population. As I was saying, this machine can save the whole world: not treating diseases, but stopping them from coming to you.

Why does it not cure the infected people?ย 

It will not cure the infected people because it has loads of chemicals and if they join in your body with the disease you can get some serious injury to your body, also because different diseases need different medicines. This is because earlier on I talked about that it makes a pop after the disease is gone, but that pop is actually a smaller explosion but still powerful, this explosion is stopped which makes it sound like a pop.

Well done Andrei! A great pitch for your invention and I can tell you have responded to the feedback you have been given throughout the week! Great use of sentence types, vocabulary and rhetorical questions!

Survival Guide In Lockdown

In this hard time we have to know how to survive and defeat this dangerous virus, so here is my guide. Every day you have to keep your mind and body healthy, but how do we do that? You may ask. We can do a 1-2 hour sport session or jog in your house,( if you have a garden you can jog there),and try having a healthy diet. To keep your mind healthy, you can read a book and answer some questions that will make your mind work hard.

When exiting the house, you should send only 1 family member equipped with gloves and a mask that is shaped on the face, this is so that the virus doesn’t go through the gaps of the mask. When they go to the shops, they should only go to buy the necessary stuff that you will need for that weak and a half. You should not leave the house if you’re not going to work or to the shops.

If at any moment you have to cough or sneeze, get a tissue and do it in it. After that, put the tissue in the bin and sanitise your hands, when you do this make sure to use soap and clean them very good for about 20 seconds. Every 30 minutes, take a sip of a hot drink. If the virus was in your mouth, it would go to your stomach and dissolve.

The end of the Pelens

Around 4 million years ago, there was once a planet full of pelens (they were that planets people) .One day a war broke between the modern ,advanced and lifeless Robots and the old, forgetful and startled Peleus, over 2 million pelens died. That year 300 were captured and only one pelen was free, his name was Leon. Around the age of 38 light years,Leon went on a frightening mission to find the captured ones and rescue them.The red fields were now yellow from all the melted structures and the robots were ruling the world. That little planet was as small as a grape. On the way to Lenox (the city were the pelens were being captive) he found an ancient and rusty robot, his name was Barley. He had awesome thoughts for saving the boy and the pelens. But first he had to dig him up.

Later that day, they were captured, but this was part of their magnificent plan. Under the dungeon, there was an underground tunnel. This tunnel was used by the president to escape the war. Leon, somehow managed to pick the locks and let everybody out, then he got them to go to the underground tunnel and go towards the bunker. That bunker should keep their hiding spot and them safe! 400 years later, the robots found their hiding spot so they urgently went to murder them. When they arrived, they bombed every single wall and wistfully extinctied the pelens. And also the old robot.

Diary entry as Stanley

16.12.2018

Dear Diary,

I am struggling to write today as my hands are so sore:I have blisters upon blisters and I am out of breath. After what felt like an eternity, I arrived at Camp Green Lake.Instantly , I knew this was hell. I was so thirsty from the sheering heat of the desert. Now as I was thinking about my decision ,I should of chosen to go to jail. I remembered the curse,this is why I had chosen Camp Green Lake. Now there is no point arguing my case. I knew I just had to leave it be.

All the kids back home were talking of their vacations at camps or in other Countries . They said they did skateboarding canoeing and water-skiing – obviously this isn’t one of those places.With a temperature rising up to 48 degrees Celsius in the shade and no water source within 100 miles.This camp is not green and it also doesn’t have a lake,this is what makes the camp very lifeless. Showers in the wild,no buildings(only tents),dry throats and sore hands: this is the worst place on Earth.As I stared out the ‘window’ I can see a area full of holes-full of sadness. It’s far too late now.I knew I had to go and dig a hole as big as space. This camp ends happiness,takes memories and turns them into never-ending nightmares.

Thereย  I was thinking the camp was bad, the thing is I didn’t even meet the people maybe they were kind-heart. The first person I’ve met was a man named Mr Sir (funny name)he had a fridge full of drinks – he never gave me one,I was sad,he was saying”you have to get used to being thirsty .” The next person to meet was Mr Pendanski,he was my counselor. He guided me to my tent,on the way to the tent he told me that his name is simple to remember(Mr Pen-dance-key),were I found 5 boys talking. As I entered the tent , Mr Pendanski introduced me to Zero,X-ray,Armpit,Magnet and Zigzag.X-ray was the only one to welcome me here,he also shook hands with me. When Mr Pendanski left, I asked Theodor (Armpit)if he knew were the Warden lived, he tossed me on to the ground,I didn’t enjoy it, and barked at me and said said “my name ain’t Theodor!”. It wasn’t a nice start to this friendship. Mr Pendanski came back and also asked me why I think Zero’s nickname is Zero, he told me it is because he doesn’t have nothing in his head.

It is true to say that this wasn’t the greatest day of my life but who knows maybe there will be a worse day tomorrow. I think that all of the days here at Camp Green Lake will be as sad and hard as this one.I can’t stop thinking about my family back home and about the summer vacation we would of had. I wish that my parents will be thinking that I didn’t steal those shoes because I didn’t. If it wasn’t for them treating me nicely I wouldn’t know how they treat me hear at camp.

Any way I hope that tomorrow I will have a better day and get to meet the other campers here at Camp Green Lake, now I have to go to bed.

Stanley Yelnats