Hello, my name is Amelia Wojcinska. Are you ever so bored that you just feel like you never wanna do anything again? Just lay in bed watching Netflix all day or what ever you like to do.. Or learn something, not the way that everyone find information these days, the key thing there is experience. Most people don`t know as much as others , so I decided to make an app, where you can have a sweet conversation with people from all around the world and share what you know about our world that’s changing more than I expected! 🙁

As we had to make our own product, I had an idea of making an app where you can communicate with people from different countries and communities. In my app, there will be 4 sections (age related): The children section will be the age 9 to 12 , the teenagers will be 13 to 17 , adults will be 18 to 40 and elderly will be 40 to how long they will live for. I wanted to do this because some things that older people talk about could not be age appropriate. All inappropriate words, phrases and emojis will be replaced with a hashtag (#)  so you are unable to see the disgusting language some people may use. The app can be used by iPhone and Android users for free. The logo will be a globe with a friendly smile so it looks like the world is speaking to you.

I want to sell my app on Google play and and the play store because both of them are very popular.   I didn’t think my app needed more things added to it because I really think that this is enough, but if I did, I would add some games like tik tak toe so you can play with your new friends. In my opinion, my app is the best because it is age appropriate , is it safe and you can support each other 24/7.

Well done Amelia – you certainly have the right tone in this piece of writing! It is informative and persuasive! You have used subordinate clauses and developed noun phrases to capture your audience!