After a long family discussion Bob travelled to America from Ireland because he was going to try and earn some money for his family since he didn’t have lots of money (his family was very poor). He knew he was going to miss them but he also knew it will earn him money. When he got there he found a very cheap house, it was tiny but it was only him.
On a cold winter day, Bob looked at a newspaper and saw this job, the job was to unload and load in things from the boats. Bob thought to himself should I get this job? Despite the amount the money it gives me but at least it will give me some money. Bob got ready into some really warm clothes since it was freezing and he went.
Finally he got there, Bob saw many other men so he was hoping that he got the job. The other men looked quite strong and mean, Bob felt like going back home. Suddenly, the man who is going to hire us came out, he chose this man in a blue coat, this man who looked mean, this man who was very strong and some other men apart from him.
Then he walked home in silence. Sadly, they all started to stare at him and some even laughed. The crew leader said don’t worry there’s probably more boats later on and that he could come. Bob still felt depressed because he couldn’t earn an money until later on.
He said to his family that he didn’t earn any money and that they would have to wait…
Wow Kayleigh! Your big write is very interesting! Well done.