L.C.to use a variety of different sentence structures

Oliver’s shoes tightly fit on his feet;his slender feet were seen in the rips and holes which were on the old dirty shoes.He was a lonely urchin;Oliver didn’t have a mum or dad which made him upset.

The young pale urchin wore old threadbare shoes.Oliver had blonde straw like hair he had old and dirty clothes.

The young urchin slept in a dark gloomy room and he was holding a candle that danced in the wind.Oliver was a pale frightened urchin because he didn’t have a mum or a dad.

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