My Poems
Haiku: Planet is dying,
Land of trees are vanishing,
This can’t carry on
Kenning:
Animals-Dying
Tree-Cutter
Leaf-Destroyer
Animal-Killer
Waste-Land
Global-Warming
Cinquain:
Trees being cut down,
Madagascar is bleeding,
Life of animals being destroyed,
This Stops Now!
Acrostic:
Turning into houses
Rude people cutting down trees
Echoes all around
Every tree loss means a animal loss
Saving trees is our problem
Thank you, Thomas for these descriptive poems. To uplevel these, make sure you are punctuating each line correctly with either a comma or a full stop (to complete a verse and for your kenning poem, could you change some lines so they show alliteration?
Home-Learning 16/11/20 – Deforestation Poetry
Haiku
Planet is dying (5)
Land of trees are vanishing (7)
This can’t carry on (5)
Kenning
Trees-decreasing
Animals-dying
Waste-land
Carbon-Realised
Ozonelayer-Bursting
Cinquian
Deforestation,
Trees being cut down,
Madagascar is bleeding,
Life of animals being destroyed.
Acrostic
Trees soul dying and falling like a broken tower,
Regret what you’re doing to earth
Every tree being cut down causes more danger
Every tree being cut down causes more life loss
Stop, this is World War 1 in deforestation style
Some excellent descriptions, Liam and I can see you are using similes to describe. Check the syllables in your cinquain and remember the pattern and theme for each line. Also, add commas at the end of each line for each poemand a full stop to complete each verse.
Deforestation Poems – Big Write
Trees disappear
Madagascar is bleeding
Make a change now
Leaf – loser
Tree – taker
Branch-breaker
Blood-maker
Life-taker
Animal-killer
Trees
Spreading across
Animals losing homes
You can still make a change
So join
Did you know
Everyone should be involved
Forests are dying
Overly disappointing
Really as if no one cares
Every tree matters
So are we going to stop
Trees are what we need to live
And we need to do something about it
Trees waving until they get cut down
It’s killing our world
Of burnt ashes
Need trees to survive, you need to start caring before it’s too late
Never ignore the fact this is happening
Every time trees get cut down
Everything is disappearing and we don’t want that
Dead is rising to the point where it’s too much
See, forests needs to live
Time is running out but you can still do something about it
On the trees where animals live are now gone
So join the army to stop this
To end all of this and continue on living
Own the victory of fighting and joining the army
People will join and you can to.
Super poetry Elise and I particularly love your acrostic poem. It reads like a chant to change the world- very well done. For each poem, can you make sure you are punctuating these with a comma at the end of each line and a full stop at the end of the verse. Also go back through your cinquian poem, making sure you follow the rules for syllables in each line.
As an uplevelling target, could you add some more lines to your kenning poem, but make these alliterations as well?
Kenning (Attack On Titan)
Never-Caring
Titan-slayer
Team-captain
Dark-hair
Never-smiling
Streak-kills
Nice kenning poem. Is this Thor, by any chance???