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Deforestation

Haiku

Deforestation,

Humanity damaging,

Stop cutting forests.

 

Kenning

Terrorising-trees,

Lonely-logs,

Dying- disappearing,

Oxygen-helpers,

Long-Growers,

Vital-Planet,

Snapping-sticks,

 

Cinquain

Forests,

Helpful, vital,

Trees illegal logging,

Horrifying and shocking,

Stop it,

 

Acrostic

Decreasing oxygen levels,

Executing trees like humans,

Forests swaying like children in a chorus,

Oxygen being travelled like a river rushing,

Rivers running across the forest,

Energy travels like an animal sprinting,

Stop deforestation it hurts everyone,

Terrific animals race through the forest,

Animals trapped in-between the forests maze,

The lungs of the planet,

Important to all,

Only found in certain locations,

Negative impact on the planet without them.

 

Very well done, Marcel. I particularly love your use of imagery and you have sheon you can follow the rules of all 4 of these poem types very well. 

 

 

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Forests are becoming nothing,

Oxygen is fading,

Riding cars taking parts of trees,

England’s Forests at fate,

Souls of trees leaving them,

Trees becoming fired up.

 

A good acrostic poem, well done using the imagery today.

 

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