STEM week was amazing.
During the week we got to make Cotten candy with mrs suwell.
In STEM week we created a Irigation system and put it in our allotment and put You water in it , had fun we learnt that not only you can buy it online but you can make it .
We went around year four and made a load of sounds with diffrent matiarial ,shared what sounds we made with the class
- Freddie??
- Diana??
Well done Diana. You have written your recount in the past tense and used some good connectives.
Check your second paragraph; you’ve used and a lot, can you use punctuation to remove some of the ands? Don’t forget to add a title to your post!
I love it! Really good Diana and Freddy!