STEM week was amazing.

During the week we got to make Cotten candy with mrs suwell.

In STEM week we created  a  Irigation system and put it in our allotment and put You water in it , had fun we learnt that not only you can buy it online but you can make it .

We went around year four and made a load of sounds with diffrent matiarial ,shared what sounds we made with the class

• Freddie??
• Diana??

Well done Diana. You have written your recount in the past tense and used some good connectives.

Check your second paragraph; you’ve used and a lot, can you use punctuation to remove some of the ands? Don’t forget to add a title to your post!