How to deal with sats difficulties

Eating healthy

Eating healthy is good because it gets u ready for the day and, your body feels awake so u can be healthy and eat healthy like fruit and vegetables. If u don’t have breakfast your body will not be ready for learning. Make sure to have a good breakfast but not too big and not too small so your belly does not hurt and you’re not hungry later if you’re in a class or an after school group. If you go to a after school group, make sure to bring a drink so you can have a drink when you are there. Fruit can make you big and strong and it is better for your body.

 

Fresh Air

How to get better air when outside: do some sports like swimming or rugby because when you’re in side you don’t get the good air. But if u do a sport outside of school you can learn more things. It will also get you stronger. Make sure to bring a drink so u can have a drink there if you’re out of breath and you need a cup of water and if u don’t try you want get what you want in life and you want be good at anything. And it is good to go to an after school group so you can get healthier so your body can get bigger and you get taller if you run your legs well hurt but at least you tried running if you’re not good because if u start something that you are not good at it might be hard but if you completely your parents and teacher well be very happy with you because u tried something that you wanted to do but you’re not good at it and after all of your dreams you. Finally, completely and you’re so happy with yourself and make sure to not stay inside all day because you well be in your room to much you want get any new fresh air so go outside and play like a sport with your friend like swimming are football stuff like that so you can have fun and play wraith your friends in the day where it is very.

Sleep maters

Sleep matters because when you use your brain in the it uses 25% of your head and if you get 6 or 7 hours of sleep u well be ready for the next day so in a lesson you are not tried. And you can do your work poplar and make sure to have a good breakfast so your also not hungry in a lesson. If you get 6 or 7 hours that is really good because then u brain well rest from yesterday and your brain well think about today and not yesterday and did you know that u brain use 25 % of your brain if you attempt to use it. It mattes so because if you stay up all night on your game are something your eyes well hurt for tomorrow because you did not get any sleep and you might have a bigger test tomorrow that you forget about and you did not do any of your and make sure to not do an all night before a test because it well hurt your eyes and you well be sleeping in class and your teacher well say why are you sleeping because you did an all-night and it can also damage your eyes a lot so make sure to not do it.

Reassuring words

Words to use in a Sats paper or if your writing something like an or use or because, words like that to make your work very good so people can see how much work you have been putting in your work and the teachers well be so happy because you have tried your best and you got it great and trust keep doing as hard as you can even if you get it wrong at least you tried your best but next time I will try even more harder. And if people are not having a good day talk to them and say are u ok and hi and hold the door open for them and that might make them happy because his friend and you make him laugh and you are the for him when people are being mean to him say that is not very nice. Make sure you have tried you best in your work are your teacher we make you to rest again because it is not good anther. For you teacher make sure to not be mean to anyone are to be mean to anyone because it is not fair for the people that are getting bull eyed don’t talk to your friends make sure to do your work fries and talk to your friends at lunch and break because if you talk to urn friend you we’ll be staying in and won’t be able to talk to ur friend and you want and not talk to them at lunch and break but if u don’t talk you well be able to talk to your friend at break and lunch

A You need a good breakfast to get more energy for the day so if your half way in to a lesson and your tried that is why you need a good sleep and good breakfast to get your body awake. And if someone is being mean to you say can you please go away it is not very nice to say that to people and stick up for people even if you’re not they friend you still have to make sure the happy are not. And have a good breakfast but not too big and not to small so you’re not hungry you go out are not. For later because you can have something to eat if you in a lesson because you can’t eat in a middle of a lesson because it is time for learning and not eating time. And if someone falls offer at lunch time help them up take them to the teacher are the so a teacher can help them then you can go back out side to play with your other friend and do not talk to your friend in your Sats because you well not pass if you talk in your Sats.

Eating healthy

Eating healthy is good because it gets u ready for the day and, your body feels awake so u can be healthy and eat healthy like fruit and vegetables. If u don’t have breakfast your body will not be ready for learning. Make sure to have a good breakfast but not too big and not too small so your belly does not hurt and you’re not hungry later if you’re in a class or an after school group. If you go to a after school group, make sure to bring a drink so you can have a drink when you are there. Furit canm

Fruit can make you big and strong and is better for your body.

Fresh Air

How to get better air when outside: do some sports like swimming or rugby because when you’re in side you don’t get the good air. But if u do a sport outside of school you can learn more things. It will also get you stronger. Make sure to bring a drink so u can have a drink there if you’re out of breath and you need a cup of water and if u don’t try you want get what you want in life and you want be good at anything. And it is good to go to an after school group so you can get healthier so your body can get bigger and you get taller if you run your legs well hurt but at least you tried running if you’re not good because if u start something that you are not good at it might be hard but if you completely your parents and teacher well be very happy with you because u tried something that you wanted to do but you’re not good at it and after all of your dreams you. Finally, completely and you’re so happy with yourself and make sure to not stay inside all day because you well be in your room to much you want get any new fresh air so go outside and play like a sport with your friend like swimming are football stuff like that so you can have fun and play wraith your friends in the day where it is very.

Sleep maters

Sleep matters because when you use your brain in the it uses 25% of your head and if you get 6 or 7 hours of sleep u well be ready for the next day so in a lesson you are not tried. And you can do your work poplar and make sure to have a good breakfast so your also not hungry in a lesson. If you get 6 or 7 hours that is really good because then u brain well rest from yesterday and your brain well think about today and not yesterday and did you know that u brain use 25 % of your brain if you attempt to use it. It mattes so because if you stay up all night on your game are something your eyes well hurt for tomorrow because you did not get any sleep and you might have a bigger test tomorrow that you forget about and you did not do any of your and make sure to not do an all night before a test because it well hurt your eyes and you well be sleeping in class and your teacher well say why are you sleeping because you did an all-night and it can also damage your eyes a lot so make sure to not do it.

Reassuring words

Words to use in a Sats paper or if your writing something like an or use or because, words like that to make your work very good so people can see how much work you have been putting in your work and the teachers well be so happy because you have tried your best and you got it great and trust keep doing as hard as you can even if you get it wrong at least you tried your best but next time I will try even more harder. And if people are not having a good day talk to them and say are u ok and hi and hold the door open for them and that might make them happy because his friend and you make him laugh and you are the for him when people are being mean to him say that is not very nice. Make sure you have tried you best in your work are your teacher we make you to rest again because it is not good anther. For you teacher make sure to not be mean to anyone are to be mean to anyone because it is not fair for the people that are getting bull eyed don’t talk to your friends make sure to do your work fries and talk to your friends at lunch and break because if you talk to urn friend you we’ll be staying in and won’t be able to talk to ur friend and you want and not talk to them at lunch and break but if u don’t talk you well be able to talk to your friend at break and lunch

A You need a good breakfast to get more energy for the day so if your half way in to a lesson and your tried that is why you need a good sleep and good breakfast to get your body awake. And if someone is being mean to you say can you please go away it is not very nice to say that to people and stick up for people even if you’re not they friend you still have to make sure the happy are not. And have a good breakfast but not too big and not to small so you’re not hungry you go out are not. For later because you can have something to eat if you in a lesson because you can’t eat in a middle of a lesson because it is time for learning and not eating time. And if someone falls offer at lunch time help them up take them to the teacher are the so a teacher can help them then you can go back out side to play with your other friend and do not talk to your friend in your Sats because you well not pass if you talk in your Sats.

 

Prepare

If you work really hard and don’t give up when doing work, you will feel like you have to do less and that means that you are learning. Also, when you make mistakes that means you are learning .

Top tips

Always do your homework, however you should still try even through you are not in school. Always try your best and it does not mater  if you pass. All that matters is that you try your best.

How to survive SATs

.have a good night sleep

.eat in the morning

.Study

.revise and do revision

.try your best and never give up

.when you get stressed think of it being good stress

.think positive

.Believe that you can do it

. You can do it everyone believes in you

Preparation is Key

We need to prepare because the SATs are coming in 3 weeks so preparing can support the chance of getting a good grade. The only way of preparing is to study (at home and school.)
You want to get good grades, so you don’t get in a bad class. That is why you should study at home and school.

Coping

If you’re stressed while your working, just feel like you’re in your safe space so you don’t feel stressed (being stressed can also make you feel not confident on the other questions so you don’t do them).

After a question, it will be a good thing to take some deep breaths for a moment so you don’t feel overwhelmed.

Surviving

If you want to survive, you’re going to need lots of sleep (sleep let’s your brain remember all the information for tomorrow).

You need to eat healthy (so you have all the energy to use for the next day to do the SATs).

Try your best, and if you don’t, you might not get the best so your not doing what you’re good at.

  Punctuation

Use punctuation such as comas, full stop and brackets so the reader knows when there’s information or if it’s a sentence or if there’s another part to it so you should use them in English.

Making sure you’re ready

Get ready for SATs by challenging yourself and maybe give up some of your free time to understand what it means. After school, you can try and understand what you didn’t at school.

SATs are approaching quickly and children are feeling the pressure of the week ahead. Here is some great advice to help you cope and stay calm.

Revision

You will need to revise maths, English, reading and SPaG. This will help you to feel more confident when you are doing, SATs. You don’t need to go over something a lot because you might feel confident, already and you could try something else** and that will help.

Getting a good night sleep

You need to get lots of sleep before your SATs. You will need to get at least 10 or 9 hours of sleep, if you get like 5 hours of sleep you will be moody and tired and you could fall asleep in class. And you will not know what you are doing and you might not finish.

Eating healthy

You will need a good meal in the  morning because if you have a little meal you will be hungry in class. You will need at least cereal or a banana they are good not chocolate or really sugary stuff so it is important to have a good meal.

Exercise

If you want to go get some exercise you can go out with your friends or you could go to the park or play football or do a sport that you like or do something that you like or run and do some stretching. Why does exercise help?

TOP TIPS

Don’t stay up all night before you do your SATs or do not stay up all night doing home work or playing games till mid night then you will be moody in the morning and grumpy and will not be in a good mood.

 

 

You have listed some good ideas.  Check for missing punctuation and explanations as to WHY a person should do these things. 

Introduction 
Have you ever wondered how crimes and punishments have evolved through out the Ages? In this writing there will be detail of crimes and punishments through history. Through the ages, theft has been the most common crime committed but it is now considered as a petty crime. In the Roman times, if you committed like patricide(killing your father) you would be put in a sack of snakes and chucked in a river to drown.

Roman times  

During the spans roughly 500bc-400ad the magnificent Roman Empire had Concorde most of the citizens world. The Roman Empire had many enslaved people, as well as citizens who were free man and women. They were often treated differently if they broke the law. There was no police force in Roman times but they did have a group called vigils. There was about 700 vigils who defeat criminals. The Romans designed there punishments to discourage potential criminals. How you were punished depend on who you were and your position in Roman society. Whipping and fines were the most common punishment in Roman times.

Anglo-saxons

The Anglo Saxons period in Britain was from around 410 to 1066. A lot of the population lived in small villages in the country side and very few lived in towns. There wasn’t a police force like we have today. Keeping law and order was the responsibility of everyone in the village. If someone was seen committing a crime then the witnesses could raise a hue ( cry , shouting for help). Everyone who heared it was expected to help chase and capture the suspects. The leader of the village would use the laws written by the king to decide what punishment you would receive. The church and local lords had the power to decide punishments. The church had its own courts and a different system of punishment. The Anglo Saxon didn’t have prisons. Most people found guilty of crimes were punished with fines

Tudors

The tudor period was from 1485 to 160ce. This was a time of many changes. Explores discovered new lands and maps had rewritten and there was religious changes across England and Wales. There was no police force during tudor times. Of ten in smaller towns and villages, preventing crime was left up to the people. In some villages and towns they employed “ parish constibles” who would be responsible for keeping the peace and catching criminals. Whipping was a common punishment for a wide variety of crimes. Vagrants(homeless people) , thieves who stole goods worth less than a shilling and those who refused to attend church would all be whipped.

Victorian times 

The Victorian times was in Britain was between 1837 to 1901.in the Victorian period the population increased and many people began to move from the country side to the towns and cities to work in factories.living conditions were often cramped with one family per room and the whole street would share an outside toilet and a water tap. In 1829, a poltitican called sir Robert peel introduced the first English police force in order to improve public order in London. Over the next ten years , many other areas of the country formed their own police force. Police men were poorly paied and they would patrol a certain area,known as their “beat”.for the first time in history prisons became the main form of punishment in this period. They were awful places.many prisoners were sent to Australia for hard labour the law allowing this was eventually changed in 1857. “Prison hulks” were ships that moored in harbour and housed criminals who were to be transported or taken to court.
Hard labour  was a common punishment.many Victorians believed that having to work very hard would prevent criminals from committing crime in the future.

World war 2

World War Two was fought between 1939 and 1945.it was a time of great hardship for many. Children in the city were evacuated to the countryside.During the war the number of reported crimes in England and Wales rose.the government had introduced new rules such as blackout ,air raid warnings and rationing. There was police forces in Britain during the war. Police duties increased because of the war.their usual tasks include keeping the peace dealing with criminals and making sure that trafic flowed freely in towns and cities.looting was a big problem the number of boomed properties provided a big temptation to looters many were given fines or short prison sentences.black market: many items sold on the black market without a rational card. if caught selling on the black market then the punishment could be a fine and imprisonment. The numbers of murders increased dramatically during the war.air raids killed so many people that it was often impossible for the police to investigate all deaths and criminals took advantage of this . If you were found guilty of murder you could be put to death.

 

 

Introduction

Have you ever wandered how crime and punishment changed through the ages? In this text, I will be explaining all about crime and punishment from Roman times to ww2. Crime and punishments have always been a thing however the most common crime has always been theft. For the crimes you committed you would always face punishment. For example ; for consistent theft in Roman times you would be flogged (whipped).

crime and punishment in Roman times

The romans lived from 500bc to 400ad , the empire ruled most of the world. Rome became very overcrowded as they enslaved many people (and countries). The most common of all crimes were murder and theft. The punishments were flogging for theft and execution for murder. They had no police so they used the community to take care of criminals. The name of these people were vigiles they would be police , firemen and they would decide punishments.More serious crimes would lead to more serious punishments like if you kill they would kill you. Many travellers come to Rome to get richer. As a result , Rome had very dark and dangerous streets. The richer people and emperors would use poor people (vigiles) to protect everyone.

Anglo Saxon crime and punishment

During Anglo Saxon times, theft once was a fine more than once is having your hands cut off. Since they didn’t have a police force the community would bring in the criminals they would not be the people that decide the punishment. If someone stole from you you could just kill them. If no one could decide whether you were innocent or guilty you would do trial by ordeal which is when god decides if you are innocent or guilty most punishments were trial by ordeal because they were very religious. They were very cruel with there punishments because if you stole and can’t pay you would be thrown off of a cliff. The most common crime was theft.

Tudor crime and punishment

The Tudors had many ways to execute you such as beheading , hanging and many more. If you were caught drunk in public you were put in the drunkards cloak (a big barrel for beer). If women gossip they have to were the scolds bridle which will hold back your young so you don’t gossip. The most common crime was gossip. The scolds bridle is only for women as they were only punished for gossip. They believed if they punished you enough you would stop committing crimes.

Victorian crime and punishment

In Victorian times they finally got police and jail. The prison was in Australia and the whole time you were there you would be forced to do manual work. If it was a crime like theft you would pay a fine, which was 4 times the amount you stole. This was because theft was still the most common crime committed. And if you committed treason you were hung (treason means you talk bad about the king). The Victorian era lived from 1837 to 1901. The Victorians introduced the police force in 1829 and was first brought to London.

ww2 crime and punishment

Looting was the most common crime because many people had to feed there families. They did have a police force but not many people were in it. If you were caught selling on the black market you would be given a fine if you didn’t pay then you were put in prison. The number of murders increased so much and if you killed you were killed as well. At night there was no light so crime was easier to get away with it. Looting and theft was much more common due to the lights always being out and the police was always deeling  with the war and criminals.

 

Romans

Roughly around the time 500BC and 400AD, the Roman empires ruled most of the world. During this time, the Roman Empire became very overcrowded ranged with many different people. From rich slavery’s who are ready to sell captured people for a fortune, to crime committers who murder people and steel food and clothes. As a result, Rome became a dark city with places where theft became rife. In Rome theft and murder became the two most common crimes.

People most commonly committed theft to survive. People stole food, clothes, and even shoes. If you where caught red handed in theft you should or pay three times as much as you stole or get pushed off a cliff.

Over a long period of time, Roman punishments became more violent. Some people are forced to wear wooden plaques around there necks or also uncomfortable wooden shoes to make escape very difficult. Most common punishments were whippings and fines.

For more serious crimes the punishments where more painful including being pushed off a cliff into a rapid river or even being berried alive. Another punishment was crucification (being nailed to a cross).

Anglo-Saxons

In the Anglo-Saxon times, they had no police force so the responsibility of catching criminals was on everyone’s back. If you where caught committing a crime you would be sent to the magistrate. Then if they couldn’t decide if you were guiltily or not you would be sent for a trial by ordeal. These include trial by fire and trial by water. Trial by water was when your hands and feet where tied and you were thrown into a river. If you flouted you were innocent however if you sank you were guilty. Trial by fire was when you had a red hot iron bar was burnt into your skin, then they would bandage your hand. After three days if there was a sign of healing you were innocent however if not you were guilty.

Tudors

Similar to the romans theft was the most common crime. Only because people stole food to feed there family’s. As police was still not introduced. The most common punishment was wiping.  You would stand i public and they would wip you with a leather belt in the back. Only men could suffer the consequence of wiping. The tudors believed that if the punishments were rough then less people will commit crimes.

Victorians

The two most common crimes where theft and pickpocketing. People would walk up to you in a crowded place and slowly take something out of your pocket. In the Victorian times the first police was introduced by Sir Robert peel. Additionally, the first prisons were introduced. They also had transportation. Transportation was when you were sent to Australia  to do their punishment there. They were transported in the bottom of the boat where they keep all the luggage. Additionally, there were many diseases, rats, and bugs. They were fed rotten and mouldy food. The transport normally took six to seven months. Some people died before they arrived.

Be sure to read through your work.  Did you use past tense verbs.

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 Introduction

Have you thought about  the past ? Well today we will be compering 5 different eras of time and comparing crime and punishment the 5 different eras will be the romans, Anglo Saxons, the tudors, the victorions and world war 2 I will be disscusing  these to see how harsh  these punishments are. I will also discuss what type of crimes you have to do to get these punishment s . Then I will be discussing the torture devices used for these types of punishments .

The crimes and punishments in the Roman times.

During the roman years through about 500 bc to about 400ad .During these years  the romans had one of the biggest empires in the world. Conquered  over 19 countries across the whole world . With such a big empire you need laws and punishments for breaking those laws , well the romans took that to seriously by stealing a apple would lead to death . Also selling bread that is light would lead to being your head chopped off . Fun fact the romans had a punishment for every single crime such as killing your dad would lead you into a venomous snake pit . Back in 500 bc there were no police men meaning that your own neighbour would chop your head off or bringing you to the judge to decide your faith, later on they  would give you a fine 4x as much as the stolen goods.

The crimes and punishments of the Anglo Saxons years.

After the romans the Anglo Saxons came in in around  410 ce with crime like  treason would  lead you to get crucified . They believed that the king was like a god so if you disobey the king you disobey the god  leading to also get crucified. They would cut your limbs off   If you stole a small thing like berries. Even if you were home less that would lead to a punishment like getting whipped on the back leaving deep scares in your back.

Crime and punishment of the Tudor times

The police still wasn’t available so just like the romans the Victorian times your neighbour would tell on you.During the Victorian times between 1837 and 1901.A man named sir Robert peel introduced the police force to London in 1829 ,countries saw this and started to use this  many people didn’t trust this idea but it did reduced crime in the area . This an new idea called a prison was invented and was used a the main form of punishments but instead of sitting in someone’s cell they would be forced to  do hard work like building a houses and making food .

 

Crime and punishments in world war 2

Between 1939 and  1945 the Second World War 2 happened with bombs dropping around the cities  making looting and crime more common making the police force really busy . This made people rich using the black market to sell food : that was over the permit.This war made  a curfew were the lights go out when this happened had a bunch of people stealing and made stealing quicker and faster because nobody saw them and : made looting quick and easy.

          CRIME AND PUNISHMENT THROUGHOUT TIME

Over time, crime and punishment has been handled very   differently. For instance, in the Roman era, crimes     could be punishable by death; however now a days (thankfully) the death penalty has been abolished in hope that the guilty can learn to be better people. But why have attitudes to punishment changed over time? What has lead to the civilised punishments we have today? In this text, I will be discussing the Roman, Anglo-Saxon/Viking,Tudor and Victorian reactions towards crimes.

Roughly between 500 BC and 400 AD, was in power of most of the world we live into now. Rome itself became overcrowded with people with many different people from various backgrounds. As a result, Rome became a very dangerous place, it had slum areas and dark places, which people 
would lurk around in. Vigilies (special individuals) had the responsibility to capture wrongdoings (criminals)
and Bring them to the magistrate. Punishments were mostly for people who are caught red-handed. The most common punishments were fines and receiving a whipping. On the other hand, There were harsher punishments that were usually saved for things like treason and murder. The harsher punishments included: crucifixion and being pushed off a cliff (basically death).

In the Anglo-Saxon times, major crimes, such as treason (plotting against the king) Punishment, for example, death or branding; however, smaller crimes would lead to a fine. You had been committing several amounts of crime continuously, well that would result in your limbs being cut off (mutilation). If a jury couldn’t decide wether a criminal was guilty or not, they would leave the decision 
to God. The name of this would be an ordeal. The criminal had to ensure a painful ordeal:standing still whilst having a red hot bar of iron burned into their skin, being tied up, hands and feet, and thrown into the water. If they survived the ordeals they would be proven innocent  
if not then would be thought guilty.  If a red hot bar of iron would be burned into your skin your hand would be bandaged and after three days the bandages would be 
removed. The wind showed sign of healing you would be proven Innocent, however, if not then you would have to endure even more excruciating, final punishment. Before weirgild was established, it was the law that victims could track down the criminal and murder him/her.

In the Tudor time crime was still the most common crime committed. This was due to the growing population and Poverty. Additionally, begging was also a celebrity in the world of crime. This was because of the rule stating that
the homeless could have their rights taken away from them and that they could be enslaved for 2 years time. Murder was not as common but certainly did occur. This was due to a certain disease that there was no cure to. Thus people would kill each other because they knew they were going to die either way.

Victorians, finally. In the Victorian times, the most common crime was still theft, however pickpocketing had to be the winner in popularity!  There was also prostitution,
which was when someone used another persons talent for financial gain. This was also quite popular. In the 1700’s the first police force was developed. It all started in London and over time moved throughout the world. Eventually, the police were in charge of controlling law and order. Even later on in time, prisons became the main force of punishment; similar to today. Another force of punishment was transportation. This was when the police would make the decision to ship you of to Australia to work. In Australia you would have to work manual labour, whilst being surrounded by the scorching sun and deadly archinds.

WW2. A time of hatred, death and war. World War Two was fought between 1939 and 1945. It was a time of hardship and heartbreak. The government announced new rules such as rationing and air raid warnings. This meant much more people were going through poverty and needed to find 
ways to survive. Many children were sent off to the countryside. During the war most of the crimes were reported in England and Wales. In many cities shops and houses 
were bombed. Thus looting and robbery became much more common. Another reason for crime was, because of the new rules, cities were dark and had no light. That meant it was easier to sneak around and not get caught. It also lead to many more injuries too. Thankfully, police still were active during the war but their responsibilities increased so petty crimes were not dealt with as much. On the other hand their duties stayed the same along with the new ones. Police had to make sure that traffic was flowing freely in towns keeping the peace and dealing with criminals. The Police also had new wartime duties. They had to make sure people obeyed the wartime blackout rules, 
help the rescue services during and after bombing raids and search for soldiers who had deserted (run away) from the army. Because off this many police were called ‘blackout bobbies’ because they had to make sure that no light from houses and shops could be seen outside. This was to protect buildings from German bombers flying overhead.