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Introduction:

Attitudes toward crime and punishment have changed over time. Lots of punishments have become less cruel and harsh over time. Do you think attitudes have changed over time? Today i will be writing about the Roman, Anglo-Saxons/Vikings, Tudor, Victorian times and Modern era attitudes. From Weregild to slaves; to transportation to prison cells. Over the years lots of time periods had gruesome and horrific ways to punish people but now punishments have evolved massively. I hope you learn from what I have wrote.

Crime and punishments in Roman times:

Rome  was around at 500BC until 400AD, the Roman Empire ruled most of the civilised world. During this time lots of people were really poor and dangerous places such as slums have the most crimes. Murder and theft became the most common crimes in the country. People who used to stop crimes were vigils (this band had 7000 people and where strong and powerful.) The most common punishments were fines and whipping. Trust me, whipping does really hurt. But now punishments have evolved and are less harsh but are still awful.

Crime and punishment in Anglo-Saxon times:

In Anglo-Saxon times crime was extremely major and had extremely major punishments. The most major crimes were treason and the punishment for that was a death penalty. Whereas, really small crimes just had a fine. If men had a jury service and they could not decide if they are innocent or guilty they would get punished! They would give horrible punishment such as grabbing a stone from boiling hot water. Horribly, if the blisters and scars did not heal up overnight it’s a sign that God thinks that they are still guilty. After that, you have to go through more punishments. Weregild was money used to pay fines such as loss of an eye or a finger.

Crime and punishment in Tudor times:

Tudor times were extremely interesting but rather awful. The most common crimes in Tudor times were begging and stealing. People did this because they were really poor and not lots of people had money at all. People who helped stop crimes were Parish constables. They would help find the criminal and they would hang around the neighbourhood to see if anyone commits a crime. The most common punishments were being branded. Branding is basically getting a vicious, flaming hot iron and scorching your skin. Weregild was also in the Tudor times.

Crime and punishment in the Victorian times:

Crime in the Victorian  times was also very popular because a lot of people were in England at the time. The most common crimes in the Victorian times were pickpocketing. It was most common because people did not have to keep the money or goods. They could have shipped it away to a different country. In the Victorian times the first police force formed and actually helped stopping the crimes. The most common punishments were being shipped to Australia or making children to lots of tough  labour. Most of the naughty children were treated like adults having so many  jobs to do just to get a little amount of money!

Crime and Punishment in the WW2 time period:

In the world war 2 period of time lots of punishments got rather different and dangerous. During the time there was a lot of war so that explains why so many crimes were being committed. The most common crimes were murder, robbery and bombs. People did this so they can use what they got to by guns or sett of bombs. People were found a lot in those times because of the police force started to increase because of all the crimes that were being committed over the years of WW2. The most common punishments in the WW2 period was short prison sentences or some fines. The war was developed all because of the Nazis and Adolf Hitler. He was the man who started all the war!

 

Excellent factual information, with varied sentences and ambitious vocabulary used. Can you find where you need to add commas for clauses within some sentences? There are a few to edit and uplevel. 

 

 

 

 

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Introduction

Have you ever wondered what crimes and punishments happened thousands of years ago? In this piece of writing, we will be discussing the Roman, Anglo Saxon, Tudor, Victorian and World War 2. Throughout all these times and even further back in history, people have always committed crimes and faced punishment. Back in  Roman time, the most common crime was stealing/theft. If you stole something in Roman time, you would get a punishment, which was to pay a fine. You had to pay four times the amount of the stolen item but if you did not have enough money to pay, then you would be thrown off a cliff. Stealing something is you stealing from the king.??

Crimes and punishment in the Roman times

A long time ago, the Roman Empire ruled most of the civilised world. All of the Romans became really powerful and all of the conquered countries were forced to follow the rules of the imposing Roman Empire. They lived in Rome, which is very crowded.  Living in Roman time was difficult. Crimes in  Roman time were murder and theft. For example: if you killed your father in Roman time, you would have to be put in a sack of deadly, poisonous snakes and be chucked into a river to drown.

Crimes and punishments in Anglo Saxon times

In Anglo Saxon time, serious, major crimes such as betraying a king would carry a very harsh, painful punishment. It might even lead to death. Smaller crimes, like stealing/theft  would result in paying a fine. If a jury of men had a hard time deciding if the person was guilty or innocent, the person, who was accused of doing something illegal, would have to put their hands in boiling water to pick up a smooth stone. The woman/man could also have to walk on blistering, burning coal, which would have been damaging. How could this help them decide? They leave the decision to God. When three days had passed, the jury checks the person’s hands or feet to see if it had healed or not. If it had not healed, then they were proved guilty, but if it was healed, then they were innocent. This was called an “ordeal”.

Crimes and Punishments in Tudor time

Thousands of years ago in the Tudor time, the most common crimes were stealing, begging and treason. The most common punishment in Tudor time was whipping. Mostly in the back. Talking too much in Tudor time would carry a very terrifying punishment. This is called gossiping. If you talked too much in Tudor time, you would have to get something called the scolds bridle. It was suppose to stop you from talking to other people. Do you know what would have happened if you talked wearing the scolds bridle? If you talked while wearing the scolds bridle, you would suffer extreme pain. It would really hurt. Shockingly, it was only used from women. How unfair was that? It went over the head and had a metal gag that went in the mouth. More serious punishments were for the more horrible  crimes. An example of a more significant punishment is execution (death).

Crimes and punishments in the Victorian time

In Victorian time, there were police forces. Most people did not trust the new police force however, over time, the police forces proved that they could reduce crime and so that they can become more popular and trustworthy. Victorians also introduced prisons/jails so that they can lock prisoners up. Prisons were very awful, but dreadful places to be in. If you stole something, you could die but if you were very young, you would be sent to Australia. Even if you were six years old and you stole something, you would still be sent to Australia. This punishment eventually changed in 1857. Other punishments including fines, hanging and being sent to join the army existed in Victorian time.

Crimes and punishments in World War 2 (WW2)

In between 1939 and 1949, World War 2 fought. ?? It destroyed lots of buildings, such as shops and houses. During the war, lots of crimes started happening in England and Wales. Theft and looting started happening when shops and houses exploded. To stop crimes in World War 2, they had police officers to guard precious items and to stop people from stealing them. Many crimes were given fines or short prison sentences. If you murdered someone and you were found guilty of it, you could be put to death. If you were caught selling on the black market without a ration card, the punishment could be a fine and imprisonment.

Very good range of factual information. Good varied sentences and good vocabulary choices.  Check through, making sure all your information makes complete sense in sentences. 

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Introduction  In this writing , there will be details of crimes and punishments from the Roman era to modern Britain. Throughout all these times , and even further back in history , people have always committed crimes and faced punishments for those. For example , if you commit patricide (killing your father) you would be put in a sack of snakes and thrown in the river to drown. Would you believe it ?

Roman times

During this particular time period , ( it spanned between 500 BC and 400 AD murder and theft was very common. Also also , in this time period , the Romans had to follow the rules of the Empire or you would be punished according to your status ( if you did not  follow the rules ). Punishments in the Roman era were not nice ! The punishment that was usually used was beating and lashing (particularly on there back ). More meaningful crimes demanded more violent and more harsher punishments. These included ; being thrown of a cliff or crucifixion. Worst of all , the Romans did not always give punishments ; they sometimes moved onto instant death. If this was you and you got blamed for something you did not do , how would you feel ? In the Roman times , there were prisons , but they  were rarely used. Sometimes , they were used to hold prisoners before trial. Although all these punishments seem very severe , but in Roman times they were actually used.

Anglo-Saxon times

The Anglo-Saxon era started in around 410 AD and ended at about 1066 AD. In the Anglo-Saxon period  , crime and theft used to usually be fined (weregild). In that time , money used to called shillins shillings (1 shilling is more than 1 pound !). If the Anglo-Saxons can’t decide whether innocent or guilty , they would do a trial (by ordeal). These included ; walking bare foot an hot coal and putting your hand in hot boiling water. If god decided to heal you in three days , you are innocent but if god did not heal it in three days , you are guilty. Also , if you commit theft , your hands would be chopped of so you can not steal. Sometimes , ( it is just for men ) if you recite a verse from the Bible , you would be let go.

Tudor times

If you want to know something quick about the Tudor period ,you should know that crime and punishment in that time period was extreme. In the Tudor Tudor period , there would be a punishment for absolutely every type of crime from petty crimes to murdering. If you gossip too much , you would get a scolds bridle to stop you from talking so much. Being burnt alive was a very common punishment. If you sell food and it is rotten, you would get a pillory ( it is where you get rotten food thrown on you ). If you are currently planning a treason against the Empire you will be executed. Remember this , in the Tudor period the punishments that were given were mainly to humiliate the criminals.

The Victorian times

The Victorians were also quite extreme. In this era , children were 10 and above were claimed as adults. So , if children do crime , they would get the same punishments as an adult. If you steal in the Victorian times you would get killed (either children or adult ). No school ? It is a crime. The children would go to child labor all the way to Australia. In the Victorian times Sir Robert Peel introduced the first police force. Then as time slowly went by the police forces slowly became more popular.

WW2

As you all know WW2 (world war 2) has very recently happened so you could know lots of things about this part of history. In WW2 , lots of crimes happened. The most common crimes that happened during this amount of time were robbery and murder. Luckily, during this time, there were police forces that tried to stop the crime from happening. Lots of people during that time , were selling things on the black market. So , those people that were caught stealing on the black market were fined and were imprisoned.

Very clear and organised facts throughout.  Also, well chosen vocabulary and varied sentences.  Add more details to your Victorians paragraph though. 

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Introduction 

Attitudes, towards crime and punishment have changed over time. Methods of punishment were acceptable in the past are considered harsh. Why have attitudes to punishment changed over time? What factors led to the strict rules and varied crimes of the past? In this writing, there will be details of the Roman era to the amazing Britain times.??


Roman era

During the time spanning between 500 BC and 400AD, the Roman Empire rules most of the civilised world. During this time, its army naturally became very powerful and all of the conquered countries. The most common crime in this era was theft, but there where other crimes as well such as killing your father and the punishment for this would be tied up in a sack of snakes and thrown in a river to drown.


Anglo-Saxon era

The Anglo-Saxon period began in Britain around 410CE. During this time, most people lived in villages or hamlets and new their neighbours very  well. There would be a leader for each village and they were responsible for overseeing the village, the church and the various people living there. Villagers mainly farmed the land, growing their own crops. Crimes, such as treason against the king or betray a lord, would carry a serious punishment (such as the death penalty), whereas smaller crimes may lead to a fine. Regular criminals were punished very bad and have limbs cut off for their crimes. If a jury of men could not decide if a person was innocent or guilty of a particular crime they would do a trial by ordeal which meant that they would stick their hand in boiling water and pick up a stone or walk over hot coals and then your hand or feet would have to heal over three days or you would be guilty.


Tudor era

The Tudor era started at 1485CE and lasted till 1603CE. This was the time of many changes. Explorers discovered new lands and maps had to be rewritten and there were religious changes across England and Wales. There were religious fighting between the Protestant and Catholic faiths.


Victorian  era

The Victorian era started at 1837 and lasted till 1901. In the Victorian period the population increased and many people began to move from the countryside to the towns and cities to work in factories. Living conditions were often cramped with one family per room and the whole street would share and outside toilet and a water tap.


World war 2

World war 2 was fought between 1939 and lasted till 1945. Children in cities had to evacuate to the countryside. During the war the number of  reported crimes in England and Wales rose. The government had introduced new rules such as blackouts, air raid warnings and rationing, this meant that much of the country, including cites, had no lights at night and so crime increased. In many cities, lots of houses and I shops were bombed and so looting and robbery became more common.

Some detailed paragraphs, Aiden and you have chosen your vocabulary well.  Add more detail to the Romans, Tudors and WW2 paragraphs and check through , adding commas for clauses where needed. 

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Crime and punishments throughout time

Have you ever wondered how crimes and punishments have changed throughout the ages? In these pieces of text there will be lots of details of crime and punishments. Thanks to the Romans (even though they invaded us) the Romans helped us with central heating, army and most importantly, crime and punishment.

Romans

There was no police force but there was a group of people called Viglies. If they caught them braking a law or someone telling them he/she was braking the law The Viglies will have every right to get him/she and take he/she to court and if they were stealing the punishment then would be a fine 4 times the value of what they stole, and if they did not pay they would of been pushed off a cliff.

Anglo Saxon

Throughout time the most common crime was petty theft. All eras had there own punishment for this. But I am going to talk the Anglo Saxons. If someone would of stolen let say a piece of bread and been caught they would of been brought to a court (hut) and if the judge could not decide if you were guilty or innocent god would decide if they were guilty or innocent. They would either have dipped your hands into a scalding bucket of water and if they were healed in 3 days you were innocent if not you were guilty.

Tudors

The most common crime in Tudors was theft and the punishment was horrifically horrible. The punishment for stealing was whipping. You would of been tied or chained to a pole in a public area, and you would be stripped to the waist and you would of been whipped. You can get this punishment as minor as stealing a loaf of bread.

Victorians

So far you would think that the Romans were bad but they don not stand a chance compared to the Victorians they hanged children up to 12 years old but they did not hang people below 12 though. They sent them to work, they had jobs like chimney sweep were you would clean somebody’s chimney with a very long brush, and sometimes animals (small animals) would fall down and sometimes hurt the children, and there was a punishment that if you did something wrong to the queen they would nail your ears to a post.

world war 2

Looting was a big problem. The number of bomb properties providing a temptation to looters. Many were given fines or short prison sentence. The amount of murders increased dramatically. Air raids killed so many people and made it almost impossible to investigate only a small few during the war. So thanks to the war their was a spike in murder. But when the war was over when the Germans “Nazis” were defeated, thanks to the Americans, French and a few more countries helped. The most of the police were killed, part of the military was killed and most parts of most countries were also killed. Their was also a shortage of murders. Most people were killed by the Nazis dropping bombs at us with their bomber planes but the way the military died was when they were fighting in he war.  So there, was no actual punishments going on in world war 2, so for world war 2 it was actually just crime no punishment!!

Some good facts, written in clear sentences with some punctuated well with commas too. Add more factual details to your Roman and Tudors paragraphs.  

 

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Interducion

This term we are learning about crime and punishment around different times for a example Romans,  Anglo Saxons, turder times, Victorians and world war 2. In these times the most common crimes was stealing because most people were poor.

Romans

This time the emperor’s ruled to 500bc to 400a. They congerd all of Europe and some of Middle East . If you stole you would get chuck of a cliff or gotten flogging and hot lead down your throat. Now we all now they  were violent . Also murder was common the punishment for that was being buried alive . If you were witnessed they would take to get your punishment. You also can get nailed to a cross .

 

 

Anglo Saxons

Lots of people would get executed because they steal for food ,the reason for is that they are homeless .If you stole more then twice you would get your hands sliced  of . If someone witnessed a crime they would scream and cry for help. Also begging is a crime . Some punishments are not death like you will walk on hot coal and if it is held In 3 dates your are innocent  . If you had a fine you can pay that of by little silver coins . The tiffing are ten people that and they would control your behaviour.

 

Turder Times

women were also executed a punishment was the scolds bridle this made so they couldn’t speak because a little sharp spike would cut the tongue if you speak. Most people were poor and murder case went down by a lot . They wouldn’t have prisons but they had rooms where you would wait
for your punishment.

Victorians

If you were a child you would go to a Work house because they said they young and fit . If you would steal you would be sent to Australia to work. It would take 6 months to get there in a rotten boat . Most children were in work house but rich children didn’t go to work house. The house were rotten nasty and the food was sloppy probably rotten. In this time they had they had police force and that is how they would be captured. Murder was rarely because there was lots of police men .

world war 2

The police was a lot bigger so people would not commit crime. Then not long after the death penalty went  and prison  were more common.
After world war 2 crimes were less common .Also women were in work house. If you killed someone in the war it isn’t bad because you have orders to do it. Did you know world war 2 went on for 6 years 1939 to 1445. On Christmas Day they played football.  Not all of the police officers could find the body’s cause of the air radar. Lots of Criminals looted blown up shops .

Great facts on crimes and punishments, Joshua but you must check and change key spellings (underlined in red) and in your sentence punctuation. 

Our crime and punishment improvements though history

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Introduction

We are looking at altitudes to crime and punishment. The first Roman punishments happened in Roman time (43ad-410ad). During the Roman era there was lots of different punishment such as pouring hot led down your throat or walk 9 feet on really hot coal. At HPS we are also learning about the Anglo-Saxon, Victorian’s, Tudor times, and world war 2. So during these you can clearly tell that the punishments are going to get less violent because there getting closer to the new millennium.

The Roman era

The Romans reined from 500 bc to 400ad (which is 900 years). Believe it or not the romans actually conquered most of the civilised world and during this time the Roman army was VERY powerful.They also were very powerful they decided to take the whole Europe and most of the Middle East. Most people from the land that they recently conquered to protect the emperor as that was their main priority.

The Anglo-Saxon era

In this time crimes we’re committed fairly often. If you were a often crime committer if you were caught committing crimes you would get a limb cut off for example a hand. When you go to court you would go to a trial by ordeal which is 9 feet walking on hot coal or pour hot led down your throat like it says in the introduction if you are guilty you scars would still be there and if there not there then you would be innocent but after all that before they let you go they would be given a fine out and you will have to pay it off with silver and then if you don’t pay the king would decide your punishment if your guilty (not many people we’re innocent because of scars and wounds can’t heal in 3 days)

Tudor era

In the Tudor times whipping someone or branding someone was common because they was the only crimes that seemed to teach thief a lesson to stop robbing someone or something. Back then in the Tudor time there was no police officers so the parish constables took care of most  the crimes the punishments that was decided by the king is put in the stock or burned but back then there was no equal rights to the woman so they  got put in a scolds bridle as a punishment for when the talk bad behind her husbands back

Victorians era

In the Victorian times they reigned from 1837 to 1901. In the Victorian era they separated the rich and the poor and to be considered rich you need a thousand pound. In 1829 sir Robert peel introduced the first ever police officer  and unfortunately the police was paid poorly. Until they came to the conclusion that they were needed to their pay wage had a raise. For the first the main way of punishment during the Victorian era is the prison like the prison we have to day in modern time. Most people were sent to Australia to do hard labour until they abolished it in 1857. Around the jail cell there was pointless jobs such as walk for hours upon hours in a circle on a treadmill. Sometimes they spin a crank round 10,000 times a day and sometimes they even tighten the screw to make sure they get stronger and that’s were screws get their name

World War 2

Did you know that world war 2 was thought from 1939 to 1945. The world war 2 battle was a hardship for a very long time. The children were evacuated to the country side until world war 2 is over. In world war 2 a lot of houses and shops were bombed so looting them became a crime because thousands of people were doing it. After all the time of not having a police force however during the world war 2 there was police force and the police duties increased due to World War Their usual tasks included keeping the peace, dealing with criminals and making sure that the traffic flowed freely in towns and cities. In the police force there was not many female police officers.The Police also had new wartime duties. They had to make sure people obeyed the wartime blackout rules, help the rescue services during and after bombing raids and search for soldiers who had deserted (run away) from the army. During the war the murders increased dramatically. The air raids during the war was insane and so many  people died from air raids that the police force could not discover all the bodies during the war as too many people died during the war protecting our country . During the war criminals took advantage because of the deaths that already happened so the could not tell the difference in the death ratio. On Christmas Day during the war they played football to show mercy upon god. Not long after world war the death penalty is abolished 

Some excellent facts on the different periods in history.  You have punctuated some paragraphs into sentences well but look again at the Anglo- Saxon and World War 2 paragraphs for sentence punctuation again. 

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Introduction:

Have you ever wondered how crimes and punishment have changed through out the years? In this writing there will be details of crime and punishment from the Roman era to modern Britain.Throughout all the wonderful times and even further back in history, all the people have always committed That was the most common crime. Crimes and faced punishment for these For example, in the Roman times, if you committed patricide ( killing your father ) you would be put in a sack with sraken and thrown  in the river to drown.

Roman:
Would you like to know what they do for Roman punishment and crimes. For example they kill you but you would be put in a sack and thrown in the river to drown and die and it has changed though the years there is detail form crime and punishment for the Roman era.

Anglo-Saxons :

Would you like to know how Anglo-Saxons live. Mose of them lived in villages and hamlets and new there neighbours really well. But mostly they worked very hard for the money they earned and  most Britons were poor.  There Anglo- Saxons began there period in Britain at 410CE.
Most of the churches held its own court and a different set of laws.

Tudor- times

The Tudor- times were a welsh English family  that ruled England from 1485 to 1603. They came to power as a result to the victory of Henry V11 over Yorkshire king Richard 111 at the battle of bosworth. If you committed treason then you will be killed. If you stop then you will get a fin and if you kill someone you will die there wasn’t police but there were people that watched the neighbourhood.

Victorian- times:

In the Victorian times they could afford really nice clothes and telephones but the poor children and adults had to work so hard in workhouse or factories they didn’t get paid very much money. By the Victorian era. All children can go to school for free. The years of the Victorian era was 20 June 1837 to 22 January  1901 but they probably got paid about 15 to 10 or 20 pounds every day to get food more clothes and to help there children or kids.

world-war 2

  1. In world war 2 was fought between 1939 to 1945 rescue workers searched through the wreckage of a police station in Coventry following the luftwaffe air range on the 8th of April 1941. It was a time of great hardship from many hard work that they done. For looting you would get a short prison sentence and a five. If you committed in the black market you get big find.  and imprisonment. And murder you are put be put to death if you are guilty

Some excellent facts, Chanel and organised well into subject paragraphs.  Check through for more spelling errors, adding capital letters for proper nouns, such as Tudor or Luftwaffe and many other examples.

 

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Introduction 

Have you ever wondered why crime has been committed? Well that’s because cruelty has always been playing with rich peoples minds! No matter what century you’re in there’s always crime. In opposition, there were always punishments to face after the crimes committed. Poor people never had another chance but to commit crime and suffer the punishment for it for the lives of their families. In this writing you will read about the most famous crimes and punishments in the British history. From the Roman era all the way to this very day. You will have fun finding out how Anglo-Saxons punished theft!

 

Crime and Punishment in Roman era

The Roman Empire had been roughly twirling around the 500 BC and the 400 AD. It is famous for how enormous it was in it’s time. It’s understandable power was known to every head in the whole world! However, because of its great population, Rome, the city itself had started to have darkly, dangerous areas where crime showed its true power. The most common crime to be committed was theft. Even though theft was done in the same way, your punishment depended on your status in the Roman Empire. If you were a citizen who paid their taxes you were most likely to get a fine 4 times the goods you stole. Yet if you were a common, helpless slave you could be put to death! The worst execution you could get was the famous crucifixion. Normally you could get it for betraying the Romans or murdering/threatening someone important.

Crime and punishments in Anglo-Saxons times

The Anglo-Saxons period started in Britain around 410CE to 1066 CE . Most people lived in little villages by the country side and grew their food. In each village there was someone in charge of others. They were also in charge of the church. Because most of the British population was poor, there were a lot of thieves as they needed the money to survive. If someone witnessed someone committing a crime they were expected to let out “ a hue cry “ This means to shout for help, those hearings the shout were expected to run and help catch the suspect as there weren’t any police. If you stole once you would get a fine for that, if you decided to repeat you luck and get caught you’d have you hand chopped off!

Tudors crime and punishments

The harsh Tudors invaded Britain in 1485 CE and ended in 1693 CE : The Tudor times were the times of massive changes, new lands were explored and maps were written. However, they were very harsh when it came to crime. As a result of that. Most people died before even turning 35 years old! The most common crimes were beginning and theft as people were poor and needed to survive. Petty theft was punished by whipping. The same punishment was use for those who refused to attend to church. Some criminals were also put in stocks which held your head and hands. People even threw rotten food at you as humiliation was the point of all punishments.

Victorian crimes and punishments 

The Victorian period began in Britain in the 1837 to 1901.The population increased a lot back then, people moved from the countryside to towns and cities to work at factories. It was very hard to get a job back then! And not only adults worked, but also kids who were counted as adults after turning 10! In Victorian time, kids were counted as just little adults who had to work just as hard every day. Same for the crimes, if a child committed a crime they’d have to take the punishment an adult would! Back then, theft was also the most common crime. The punishments for it were all about putting you in a loop you could never get out of. The punishments  you could get was a workhouse or being sent to Australia. The workhouse was a terrible place, they gave you a room you could sleep in and food. However, that wasn’t for free! You’d have to pay for it, however you didn’t get payed enough in one day to pay the bill. That’s why you had work and work but never actually get out of there. If you got in there before turning 18 , when you turned 18 you’d get shucked out of there. Yet because you still owned them some money you’d get sent back there soon enough. Being sent to Australia was also nearly as horrible because no one really knew about it as it was a new island climbed by Britain. It took 6 months to get there, most people died on their way there. At one point tho they realised children were children and made special schools for them if they committed crimes.

World War 2 crimes and punishments 

World war 2 war fought between the 1939 and 1945. It was a hard time for everyone. The children were sent away from their families to a countryside, to an unknown place. To an unknown family. Yet no matter how terrible how terrible the times were there was still crime committed making the situation even worse and worse. At the time, the most common crimes were: theft, murder and bombing. Theft was one of the common ones because people didn’t get paid enough and they needed food. They needed to feed their families, they needed to feed their selfs. Murder was committed a lot as people disagreed with the new rules, some people lost their life’s while being bombed. Bombing was also a common crime, shops were bombed as people needed more money and food to survive. Some people bombed more important people as they disagreed with the rules and sometimes because they didn’t get enough, enough food, enough money. It was hard to survive. Most of these crimes were punished by prison and being sent there for a short period. If you betrayed Britain you’d be put to death. The police was expected to catch the criminals and bring them to court .

Good researched paragraphs, Inna but edit your work for commas in clauses.

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Have you ever wondered what it was like all the way the way back in Roman,Anglo Saxon, and tudor times well today if not I will be telling you all about them. Moods towards crime and punishment have changes insanely  through the


years. What different factors have led to strict rules and varied of the past. One really different thing about then and now is that back then if you stole an apple you would get whipped but now if you did you would just  be told not to do it again. So the difference is so crazy back then.People would think it is okay to steal but then again it is never right to steal anything even if it is just a apple . Because people at shops go to spend there money like I said to put food  and drinks on the shelves for other people to  eat and drink so if you shop lifted before you are taking food that people spend there money on for you. DONT STEAL!

Roman period

In the Roman times the most common crime that was committed was Theft. Because 45million plus people  lived there it was super smelly and damp and overall a very dangerous and dirty place to be at. Well so many people thought that it was ok to do a crime that was small to do but they were clearly wrong because no crime was okay to do on any level. It is still a really bad thing to do even if it is just stealing an apple it is still a horrible thing to do it is called shoplifting when you steal from a shop.shoplifting well is not good at all because it is stealing from the person who spend loads of money to put food and drinks for people to get to survive. So always remember to not steal or ever do a crime.

Anglo-saxon

years on years  ago people believed that a crime called treason was the worst crime you could do and they were no wrong. Treason was when you did not listen to the king or the law. Some people would not even listen to God, that is so mean so therefore the punishment was well… Execution which was seen the worst punishment possible and could happen by causing treason or murdering enough person Execution in the end could kill a person!

Tudor times
Believe it or not in Tudor times I know this is going to sound weird but he worst crime was begging. Which in my opinion was really unfair because to this day people are still begging for money to be able to get a home for theirselves and for people to see that as a crime is just really mean when all they had to do was just give them some money to brighten up their days! The most common punishment back in Tudor times was a whipping you could get this by stealing an apple from a shop so shoplifting basically.

Victorian
In the years of the 1920s the police were introduced but they were originally called the vigilles which were a little group of people who got the police to actually exist to this day. Back then the vigilles were very new to being police but now days the police can handle anyone or anything. The vigilles were still very good at what they did and I am thankful for the vigilles to create police because now if there were no police it could have leaded to crimes being allowed which should never happen and has never been allowed. For a very good reason as well it is because there would be much more deaths probably lots of people stealing and it would honestly be really bad. The world would feel really bad and not safe. So that is what is what it would be like without the police. In the world life’s are saved by the police which is fonominal. In my mind nobody should even think about murdering someone because it is probably the worst crime possible to commit.

World war2
World war 2 started in 1939 and was when you would fight for your country risking your own life to save other people life’s which I think is super nice to do people In the war well fifty fifty people probably made it out alive which is really sad. Also another sad part is how long your there and your family might just say goodbye not knowing one hundred percent he will come back it must be so scary. But if they make it back alive I can just imagine how happy the family would be to see them again. Everybody who goes to the war must be scared also but knowing they would keep there country and there family safe from doing it probably make him feel ten times happier than they were. Some people well the majority of people go to the war and someone may through or shoot someone and there leg and arm could come of from it. So I really appreciate the people who go to the war to save well us? When they do not even know who we are probably so that is why I appreciate world war fighters, for saving us and keeping us safe however you risking your life for us I can still just not believe they would do that for us strangers. 1 more thing I need to say is that in the war a person wrote a poem in the war about the war and then sadly got killed so I just respect everybody in the war who was fighting for us and our country.

Opinion
My opinion about all the crimes and the punishments for them is a bit unfair because if someone did not believe in God back then it was seen as a really bad thing and you could be killed for doing it. When it just someone’s opinion. And for stealing an apple you could get a really hard whipping well when now you would just get tolled not to do it ever again and then they could just go that easily. So I think most of the punishments for the crimes can sometimes not be fair at all because there was this story where this guy tried to help his family and then he go put to death for it.THE END!I hope you learned a lot more about Romans Tudor Victorian world war and Anglo-Saxons today so I think that most of the punishments for the crimes were mostly unfair.

Brandon some good facts in this writing but two major things to improve- sentence punctuation throughout and your level of fomality needs to be improved.