LC:To use different sentence structures depending on the formality

Introduction.
Have you wondered about crime and punishment though out the past? However the most common crime through out the past was theft. In this writing, there are facts about the Roman era to the  Morden Britain. Further back history there has always been punishments for the crimes that people  had done.

Roman era
Most of the crimes in the roman was stealing because people were mostly poor and had no food or money. In the Roman times  there would be crimes in the temple that was mostly  be caused from poor people stealing  food because they would  be starving . Most of the punishments would be whipping and fines, were the common punishments. Normal the criminals  would get I caught by the police.

Anglo- Saxon
In the anglo Saxon were the most common crimes was stealing, however if you did it  more than once you would get your hand cut off. There were police that was responsible for the towns crimes and punishments.  The church had its own system  of the punishment for the crimes. If a jury  man could nor decide if a person was innocent or guilty  of a particular  crime. The church and the local lords  had the power to decide. 

Well done for completing paragraphs for these eras in history.  Very good introduction and key points given. Check through your spellings as well as adding commas for clauses in your report. 

 

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