One night Jo looked under his bed then there was a monster under his bed . The monsters name was Moz he kept Jo up at night because he was snoring very loudly . Jo tried a lot of thing s to ignore him but nothing worked. Then Moz became friends with Jo and Moz played with Jo every night and all night. Christmas morning came and Jo found a present from Moz . The present was a star night light so put the night light on that night and Moz wasn’t there any more. But the next night the night light was back on and Moz came back.
Do check for your use of commas to show clauses. Could you add some extra detail explaining about what happened to Joe during the days?