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John Lewis ad 2017 #MozTheMonster

Once upon a time, there was a boy called Jeff that never tidied his disgraceful, disgusting room; his parents always told him off but he didn’t care about it. But one shocking day, his father (who was a mad scientist) brought in a chemical liquid into Jeff’s room for his chemistry test at his school. Unfortunately, his father tripped over a pile of T-shirts and socks and accidentally hit a dangerous beaker of chemicals -which was placed before hand- and the two chemicals got absorbed into the pile of T-shirts and socks.

The next morning, the pile of T-shirts and socks was shivering and shaking. Then ‘it’  emerged from the putrid-smelling, ancient pile of  dreadful, murky clothes; ‘it’ was an enormous,  muscular giant like no-one has ever seen before. The giant was so excited to be alive that he accidentally  knocked out Jeff’s father. Shocked, Jeff  suddenly fainted, after a few minutes he found himself in the giants gigantic hand. The giant was friendly to Jeff and became his friend after a few days so Jeff  named the creature ,Moz. Every night Moz snored and snored.. and snored but one night, Moz snored so heavily loud it woke up everyone in the house so his parents traveled up to Jeff’s room (in the attic) to investigate what was creating that peculiar noise. When his parents finally arrived to his ragged, tattered room Jeff heard and told Moz to camouflage itself  from his strict parents but the giant didn’t hide in time. The parents opened the door and came to the sight of a monstrosity. Jeff’s mother screamed then hurried downstairs; his father sprinted after Jeff’s mother to calm her down. As his mother hurried downstairs, she grabbed her phone and called the police.

As the police got closer and closer.. and closer, Moz was getting more and more scared. Moz tried to escape but Jeff wouldn’t let him escape  his grasp. Moz heard the police sirens coming and escaped through the window. In the gloomy night, Jeff opened his  window for Moz to come back but he never did. The next day, Moz found a open window to hide from the police. Moz climbed into the building and found a little boy called Joe. That was how they became friends.

 

 

You hurt me – Anti-Bullying Poem

I am like everyone else

I don’t know why no one will trust me

All of your words will hurt me

I hear you make jokes all about me

 

I get scares every time you say something to me

What are you trying to do to me?

I feel all alone

I am like everyone else

 

Are you trying to kill me?

what happened to our friendship?

You were always there for me

but now I can’t see you anymore.