In stem week we made irrigation systems. It was very fun.To make a irrigation system first get a bottle not too small.Then get about 5 pins so if one breaks you have spare then get some scissors and cut the bottom.

After that put the pins in the lid and keep repeating that and then do it again but just do it a bit under.Do it until there’s loads and then keep doing it around.

Then we  went outside and dug a hole so you irrigation system can hit and it won’t fall over. In the wind then finally put you irrigation system.In the hole but the lid hast to be facing the mud then when it rains it will water your plants.

A great recount using connectives and written in the past tense.

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