Last week we made candy flos we went in little groups we had a blender and some sticks, we put candy floss things and wate until we se cob webs ,then we put our stick in the blender and we eat some!

Irigation system:

First we got a plastic bottle and we put some holes in it.Then we cut the bottom of the bottle of and we  dug a holl in the alotment and put the top of the bottle in the hole.

A great recount of the week almost all  in the past tense!

Check your spellings (the words underlined in red) and make sure all of your verbs are in the past tense. Read your first paragraph; does it make sense? Do you need some punctuation in there?